Glossary entry

English term or phrase:

The distorted city reflects in transient bits of water

French translation:

les flaques d'eau offrent un reflet déformé de la ville

Added to glossary by FX Fraipont (X)
Jan 29, 2019 11:16
5 yrs ago
English term

The distorted city reflects in transient bits of water

English to French Other General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters Design
Bonjour,

Comment traduiriez-vous "the distorted city reflects in transient bits of water" ?
Je pensais à "la ville déformée se reflète dans les flaques".

Merci
Change log

Feb 12, 2019 06:32: FX Fraipont (X) Created KOG entry

Discussion

B D Finch Jan 29, 2019:
@Eliza "Bits of water" is, an example of the poor writing mentioned by AllegroTrans. So, there might not be much point trying to work out whether it means puddles or not. Puddles can disappear very fast in a hot climate, once the sun comes out. The photos in your ref are very interesting and this might even be what the text is about. The photographer made the droplets artificially and the reflections would probably not be visible except in photos.
Eliza Hall Jan 29, 2019:
Flaques = smaller than bits Flaques = puddles. Bits = smaller than that. I see this image more as droplets of water with reflections in them. Like these: https://www.lonelyplanet.com/news/2016/10/03/macro-photograp...

Droplets are also more transient than puddles.
AllegroTrans Jan 29, 2019:
I think we need more context/text. Apart from this it's not very well written English
B D Finch Jan 29, 2019:
@Asker How you translate this depends upon the context. It might be important to retain the idea that the distortion applies to city itself. For instance, this might be intended to convey something about social problems, not only the visual distortion of the reflections in the water.
Elisabeth Richard Jan 29, 2019:
Personnellement Séverine, je préfère ta suggestion.

Proposed translations

+2
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les flaques d'eau offrent un reflet déformé de la ville

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Note from asker:
Merci, en effet ça sonne beaucoup mieux.
Peer comment(s):

agree Philippe Noth
57 mins
agree Michèle Voyer
1 hr
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+1
6 mins

les flaques d'eau offrent un reflet de la ville dénaturée

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Note added at 7 minutes (2019-01-29 11:24:07 GMT)
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distorted + city
Peer comment(s):

agree Yvonne Gallagher
23 hrs
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