Competition in this pair is now closed, and the winning entry has been announced. Discussion and feedback about the competition in this language pair may now be provided by visiting the "Discussion & feedback" page for this pair. Entries may also be individually discussed by clicking the "Discuss" link next to any listed entry. Source text in Spanish Mi amigo no encontró lo que buscaba, y según yo llegué a presumir, consistió en que no buscaba nada, que es precisamente lo mismo que a otros muchos les acontece. Algunas madres, sí, buscaban a sus hijas, y algunos maridos a sus mujeres, pero ni una sola hija buscaba a su madre, ni una sola mujer a su marido. Acaso—decían,—se habrán quedado dormidas entre la confusión en alguna pieza... Es posible—decía yo para mí,—pero no es probable.
Una máscara vino disparada hacia mí.
—¿Eres tú?—me preguntó misteriosamente.
—Yo soy—le respondí seguro de no mentir.
—Conocí el dominó; pero esta noche es imposible; Paquita está ahí; mas el marido se ha empeñado en venir; no sabemos por dónde diantres ha encontrado billetes. ¡Lástima grande! ¡mira tú qué ocasión! Te hemos visto, y no atreviéndose a hablarte ella misma, me envía para decirte que mañana sin falta os veréis en la Sartén... Dominó encarnado y lazos blancos...
—Bien.
—¿Estás?
—No faltaré.
—¿Y tu mujer, hombre?—le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia, un dominó negro que llevaba otro igual del brazo.
—Durmiendo estará ahora; por más que he hecho, no he podido decidirla a que venga; no hay otra más enemiga de diversiones.
—Así descansas tú en su virtud; ¿piensas estar aquí toda la noche?
—No, hasta las cuatro.
—Haces bien.
En esto se había alejado el de los cuernecillos, y entreoí estas palabras:
—Nada ha sospechado.
—¿Cómo era posible? Si salí una hora después que él...
—¿A las cuatro ha dicho?
—Sí.
—Tenemos tiempo. ¿Estás segura de la criada?
—No hay cuidado alguno, porque...
Una oleada cortó el hilo de mi curiosidad; las demás palabras del diálogo se confundieron con las repetidas voces de: ¿me conoces? te conozco, etcétera, etc.
¿Pues no parecía estrella mía haber traído esta noche un dominó igual al de todos los amantes, más feliz, por cierto, que Quevedo, que se parecía de noche a cuantos esperaban para pegarles?
—¡Chis! ¡chis! Por fin te encontré—me dijo otra máscara esbelta, asiéndome del brazo, y con su voz tierna y agitada por la esperanza satisfecha. ¿Hace mucho que me buscabas?
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Competition in this pair is now closed. | My friend did not find what he was looking for. As I came to suspect, this was because he wasn’t searching for anything at all, which is precisely what happens to so many others. Yes, some mothers looked for their daughters, and some husbands looked for their wives, but not a single daughter sought out her mother, nor did any wife seek out her husband. “Perhaps they fell asleep in some room amidst all the confusion,” they would say. “It’s possible,” I would say to myself, “But not likely.” A mask rushed toward me and mysteriously asked, “Is it you?” “It’s me.” I replied, certain that it was no lie. “I recognized the domino, but it’s impossible tonight. Paquita is over there, but her husband insisted on coming. We don’t know how the hell he found tickets. What a shame! Can you believe his timing?! We saw you, and since she wouldn’t dare speak to you herself she sent me to tell you that she’ll see you tomorrow without fail at the Sarten Theater…Red domino with white bows…” “Okay.” “Are you in?” “I won’t miss it” “And where’s the missus, sir?” A black domino arm in arm with another black domino asked a strange being dressed in cornucopias. “She must be sleeping by now. As hard as I tried, I couldn’t convince her to come. There isn’t a woman in this world more opposed to having fun.” “Well, you can rest easy in her virtue. Do you plan on staying all night?” “No, just until four.” “Good idea.” With that, the one with the cornucopias walked away and I overheard these words: “He doesn't suspect a thing.” “How could that be? I left an hour after him…” “He said four?” “Yes.” “We have time. Do you trust your maid?” “There's no reason to worry, because…” A crowd cut off the train of my curiosity. The rest of the dialogue got mixed up with the repeated sounds of: “do you recognize me” “I know who you are” etcetera, etc. Wasn’t it just my luck that night to have worn a domino costume exactly like the ones worn by all the lovers? Certainly I was luckier than Quevedo, who arrived that night to find all of those people waiting to hit him. “Psst! Psst! Finally, I’ve found you.” Another slender mask said to me as she grasped my arm. Her voice was soft, aflutter because her hopes had been fulfilled. “Were you looking for me for long?” “Not at all, because I wasn’t expecting to find you.” | Entry #16483 — Discuss 2 — Variant: USuseng
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sought out | Good term selection Excellent idea of using a different choice of words for the second occurence of "buscar". | yashia No agrees/disagrees | |
I won’t miss it” | Flows well | Carolina Orloff (X) No agrees/disagrees | |
+2 1 A black domino arm in arm with another black domino asked a strange being dressed in cornucopias. | Other One of the few who understood the sentence. | Ana Maria Edlin | |
Wasn’t it just my luck that night to have worn a domino costume exactly like the ones worn by all the lovers? | Flows well | Ira Saied No agrees/disagrees | |
“Psst! Psst | Flows well | Carolina Orloff (X) No agrees/disagrees | |
+1 Her voice was soft, aflutter because her hopes had been fulfilled | Good term selection | Charmaine Kizzie | |
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some mothers looked for their daughters, and some husbands looked for their wives | Spelling There is no need to include the word "look" twice. | yashia No agrees/disagrees | |
| Grammar errors progressive form; ...were looking for... | axies | |
looked | Spelling ibid; progressive form; ...were looking for... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 1 sought out her mother, nor did any wife seek | Grammar errors progressive form; ...were looking for... seeking etc; | axies | |
| Grammar errors progressive form; ...were saying... | axies | |
tickets. | Mistranslations billetes is banknotes, and slang for money in general. Tickets is boletos. Easy mistake, esp. for a French speaker: billet = ticket. False friend! | Werner Maurer No agrees/disagrees | |
Okay | Other Sounds too modern. | Rose Berbeo No agrees/disagrees | |
“Are you in?” | Other Too modern. Oddly, someone flagged Okay as too modern, and this is far more modern and they didn't flag it. | Werner Maurer No agrees/disagrees | |
+4 where’s the missus, sir | Other Incorrect register | amanda moody | |
ar | Punctuation comma | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
as | Punctuation comma | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
cornucopias | Mistranslations Little cornucopias. Cuernitos could be taken as synonymous with cuernos, but cuernecitos can't. | Werner Maurer No agrees/disagrees | |
“Well, you can rest easy in her virtue | Other ''Así descansas tú en su virtud'' Literally: this way you (can)rest in her virtue. Real meaning, judging from the text, beginning to the end of document: '' this way you don't have to be worried/ be concerned, about her virtuousness’’ | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 1 staying | Omission ...staying here... | axies | |
With that, the one with the cornucopias walked away | Mistranslations Meanwhile the [one with the] cornucopias had walked away | Werner Maurer No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 1 “He doesn't | Mistranslations ...no one...? | axies | |
| Mistranslations The English here suggests the speaker doesn't believe that he doesn't suspect anything - the Spanish suggests that there would be no way he would suspect anything | James Peel | |
him | Mistranslations ...after he... ''him'' may not be suitable to finish the phrase; there is an interruption in the dialog and therefore we do not know what the person was going to add. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
your | Mistranslations ...the maid. With a particular maid in mind but not his or hers. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
who arrived | Mistranslations verb; ...that looked... that resembled. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
find you | Mistranslations find you HERE. in this place etc Reason being that the verb ''encontrar (se)'' in Romance languages means actually to meet (with), instead of to find. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend didn't find what he was looking for, and I came to the conclusion that, as in the case of many others, it was because he wasn't looking for anything. It’s true, some mothers were looking for their daughters, and some husbands their wives, but not one daughter was looking for her mother or one wife for her husband. Maybe, they said, in the commotion they had fallen asleep in one of the rooms. It's possible, I thought to myself, but not likely. A mask shot out at me. - Is that you? it asked mysteriously. - It is, I replied, certain I was telling the truth. - I recognised the costume; but there’s no chance tonight; Paquita’s here; but her husband insisted on coming; we don’t know where the devil he got the tickets. What a shame! What an opportunity! We saw you, but she didn’t dare speak to you herself, so she sent me to say we’ll see you tomorrow in the Sartén, without fail… Crimson costume with white ribbons… - Good. - Will you be there? - I certainly will. - And your wife, man? I said to a strange creature dressed from head to foot in little cornucopias; a black costume, arm in arm with another exactly the same. - She’ll be asleep by now: nothing I could do would persuade her to come along; no one hates a good time more than she does. - So you have a clear conscience; are you staying all night? - No, just until four. - Quite right. With this, the creature in the cornucopias drifted off, and I overheard these words: - He didn’t suspect a thing. - How could he? If I left an hour after him… - At four did he say? - Yes. - We’ve got time. Are you sure of the maid? - Nothing to worry about at all, because… A roar of sound cut across the thread of my curiosity; the rest of the conversation was lost in the babble of: do you recognise me? I know you, and so on and so on. So was it to be my bad luck tonight not to be wearing a costume, like all the lovers, more fortunate than Quevedo, mind you, that in the darkness looked like so many others eager for a match? - Tsk! Tsk! I’ve found you at last – said another graceful mask, taking me by the arm and asking in her gentle voice, trembling with hope fulfilled: - Have you been looking for me long? - Not at all, because I wasn't expecting to find you. | Entry #15935 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Britishbritish
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+2 no one hates a good time more than she does. | Good term selection | Charmaine Kizzie | |
+1 A roar of sound cut across the thread of my curiosity; the rest of the conversation was lost in the babble of: do you recognise me? I know you, and so on and so on. | Flows well | Lynda Tharratt | |
hope fulfilled | Good term selection | David Ronder No agrees/disagrees | |
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-1 +1 2 t | Grammar errors preposition ''for'' is missing; | axies | |
said | Grammar errors ...they were saying... maybe aloud to each other, etc. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
-2 2 It's possible, I thought to myself, but not likely. | Other this sentence lacks of veracity and style and does not show/appear to be a monologue. the text becomes impersonal etc,. ''It's possible...but not likely''; I said to myself. | axies | |
-1 +1 1 shot out | Mistranslations running...in haste... in a hurry = a correr; con prisa; | axies | |
-2 +2 3 it | Mistranslations inappropriate when referring to a person | amanda moody | |
+2 I recognised the costume; but there’s no chance tonight; Paquita’s here; but her husband insisted on coming; we don’t know where the devil he got the tickets | Punctuation Too many semicolons. The phrases could have been made into full sentences. | keelin feeney | |
she didn’t | Mistranslations Narration calls for Prog. form: (her) not daring to... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
so she | Spelling ibid; narrative lacks. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
we’ll | Grammar errors Not a ''menage à trois'' in the original | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
And | Mistranslations In this type of construct, "y" means "where's?" | Werner Maurer No agrees/disagrees | |
- So you have a clear conscience | Mistranslations '' this way you don't have to be worried/ be concerned, about her virtuousness’’ Meaning her. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
Nothing to worry about at all, | Syntax Too clumsy. Does not flow. | Carolina Orloff (X) No agrees/disagrees | |
roar of sound | Other A 'roar of sound' is a tautology | David Ronder No agrees/disagrees | |
+2 So was it to be my bad luck tonight not to be wearing a costume, like all the lovers | Mistranslations | Lynda Tharratt | |
| Grammar errors ...to meet you, more likely. Reflexive verb ''encontrarse'' | axies | |
| My friend never found who he was looking for, and I came to realize that he wasn't really looking for anybody, just like a lot of other people. Some mothers were actually looking for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but not a single daughter was looking for her mother, nor was there a single wife looking for her husband. People said they might have fallen asleep in some room during all the confusion. 'It's possible', I said to myself, 'but not very likely'. A mask came flying towards me. "Is that you"?, it asked me mysteriously. "It's me", I replied, knowing I wasn't lying. "I recognized your cape, but tonight will be impossible; Paquita is here, but her husband insisted on coming along. We don't know where the devil he found some money. What a shame! It's such a great chance! We noticed you, and since she was too shy to do it herself, she sent me over here to tell you that we'll see you all tomorrow morning in Sartén.... look for a red cape with white ribbons... "Okay". "You got it?" "!'ll be there." "And your wife, man?", that he directed to a very strange-looking creature wearing horns of plenty all over, a black cape holding onto a another cape by the arm. "Probably asleep now; no matter how hard I tried, I couldn't convince her to come. There's no worse enemy to fun than she is." "Well, you can have fun on her behalf. Do you plan to stay here all night?" "No, just until four." "Good idea." While we were saying this, the little guy wearing the horns of plenty walked away, and I overheard him saying, "He doesn't suspect a thing." "How can that be?" I left an hour later than he did..." "Did he say four o'clock?" "Yes." "We have time. Are you sure about the maid?" "Nothing at all to worry about, because..." A wave of noise cut into the ribbon of my curiosity; the rest of the conversation blended into the repeated exclamations: "Do you recognize me" "I know who are you", etc. I guess it was no bright idea of mine to come out tonight wearing a cape just like all other lovers, happier, that's for sure, than Quevedo, who came out at night to fight all who were waiting. "Pssst! Pssst! I finally found you", said another slim figure in a cape, taking me by the arm, in a voice that was tender and excited from the satisfaction of finding me. "Have you been looking for me for long?" "No, not really, because I never expected to find you." | Entry #19219 — Discuss 0 — Variant: USuseng
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cut into the ribbon of my curiosity | Good term selection | Charmaine Kizzie No agrees/disagrees | |
+2 1 Quevedo, who came out at night to fight all who were waiting. | Other Quevedo was known for getting into fights. | Karen Dinicola | |
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| Mistranslations ''lo''; I don’t think it refers to a person but to a thing or object. | axies | |
-2 2 cam | Omission ...and as I... | axies | |
realize | Mistranslations Half dislike. Suppose, not realize. On the other hand, "realize" flows well, and it doesn't fail to translate the idea. | Werner Maurer No agrees/disagrees | |
+2 1 that he wasn't really looking for anybody | Mistranslations mistranslated because of previous misinterpretation. | axies | |
-3 2 a lot | Omission ...just like it happens... | axies | |
said | Grammar errors Acaso—decían,... ‘’They were saying’’...again this is happening now. Progressive form of the verb | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
-2 +4 2 it | Mistranslations inappropriate use of "it" when referring to a person | amanda moody | |
-1 1 money | Other doubtful; tickets more probable. | axies | |
-1 1 shy | Mistranslations I also could say ''too afraid'' but ''not risking...not venturing... is better for this translation. | axies | |
| Mistranslations ...os vereis... = You will see (one another, each other, both of you etc.) | axies | |
red | Grammar errors ...reddish... (adj.) | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
"Okay".
"You got it?"
"!'ll be there. | Spelling These terms are not consistent with the style of the era. | Rose Berbeo No agrees/disagrees | |
+3 1 "Well, you can have fun on her behalf. | Mistranslations From the context and the style of the era the piece was written, one can deduce the reference is to the woman's 'virtue' | Emma Martinez | |
the little guy | Spelling This term not consistent with style of the era | Rose Berbeo No agrees/disagrees | |
did | Mistranslations ...he... (?) question mark. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
+4 I know who are you", etc. | Grammar errors grammatically incorrect English | Emma Martinez | |
to fight | | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
of finding me | Mistranslations ...fulfiled hope | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
never expected to find yo | Other General comment. I know that this represents 90%+re: translations by all proZ contestants/pears. The fact is that this sentence looks incomplete to me until we add to it - find you HERE. in this place etc Reason being that the verb ''encontrar (se)'' in Romance languages means actually to meet inste | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend found not what he sought, for which I came to suppose that he sought nothing, which is precisely what happens to so many others. Some mothers, yea, they seek their daughters, and a few husbands their wives, but not a single daughter sought out her mother, nor a single wife her husband. "Perhaps," they would say, "they've fallen asleep somewhere amidst the confusion..." "Tis possible," I would say to myself, "but not probable." A mask came bolting towards me. "Is it you?" the mask asked me mysteriously. "It is I," I responded, with the sureness that it was not a lie. "I recognized the mask; but tonight is impossible; Paquita is here; but, her husband has insisted on coming; we don't know where the devil he found invitations. Oh what a disgrace! Just look at the sight! We saw you, and since she does not dare speak to you herself, she sends me to tell you that tomorrow without fail you shall meet in the Sartén... Pink mask and white ribbons..." "Very well." "You'll be there?" "I shan't fail." "And your wife, sir?" said a black mask, arm in arm with another identical to its own, to a thoroughly strange creature wholly attired with little horns-of-plenty. "Likely sleeping at this hour; try as I might, I have not succeeded in convincing her to come; there is none so loath to amusement." "So you rest on her virtue. Will you be here all night?" "No, until four." "The better for you." With this, the horned one withdrew, and I overheard these words: "He suspects nothing." "How could he possibly? If I left an hour after he..." "At four, he said?" "Yes." "We have time. Are you sure about the maid?" "There is no concern, because..." A wash of sound cut my curiosity short; the remaining words of their colloquy became muddled with an echo of voices: do you recognize me? I recognize you, and so on and so forth... Wouldn't it be just my ill fortune to have brought the same mask tonight as wore all the paramours? Better off, certainly, than Quevedo, who that night looked as one that so many others sought to wallop. "Psst! Psst! At last I found you," another svelte mask said to me, clutching me by the arm, her voice tender and aroused by a hope fulfilled. "Have you been looking for me long?" "Certainly not, because I did not expect to find you." | Entry #15625 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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+1 "Is it you?" the mask asked me mysteriously. | Flows well | Rose Berbeo | |
where the devil he found | Flows well | keelin feeney No agrees/disagrees | |
-2 2 said a black mask, arm in arm with another identical to its own, to a thoroughly strange creature wholly attired with little horns-of-plenty. | Other One of the few to have understood the sentence structure. | Ana Maria Edlin | |
+3 there is none so loath to amusement. | Flows well In general, love how you kept the period of the piece. Well done! | Karen Dinicola | |
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-3 2 My friend found not what he sought, for which I came to suppose that he sought nothing, | Mistranslations Sought is incorrect. We say: were''looking for; searching for; trying to find, etc, etc,.’’ Also in English the verbs need to be repeated, otherwise doesn't make sense to the reader. i.e. ...some mothers were looking for... and some husbands were looking for/ searching... and so on | axies | |
they seek their daughters, and a few husbands their wives, but not a single daughter sought | Grammar errors progressive form of the verb to be used i.e. seeking...looking | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| Grammar errors ...they were saying... | axies | |
-1 1 hey've fallen asleep somewhere amidst the confusion | Spelling somewhre else | Claudia Orozco | |
Tis | Spelling 'Tis an ommision of an apostrophe. | yashia No agrees/disagrees | |
| Mistranslations The excerpt doesn't tell the whole story (available online). "Careta" is used for mask. Plus, in attendance are a Moor, an Oscar statue, an Edipus, a Vestal Virgen, a Roman, a New World Indian and 100 Black Dominós, so dominó is a costume. | Michael torhan (X) | |
| Mistranslations tickets. (es presumido; no habla de invitación) | axies | |
+2 1 Oh what a disgrace! Just look at the sight! | Mistranslations | James Peel | |
t | Punctuation comma | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
Pink mask | Mistranslations as per previous comment (mask) + pink isn't ''encarnado''. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
"Likely | Mistranslations ''More likely...'', acceptable. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
"So you rest on her virtue | Mistranslations too literal. clinging/holding on to/of my arm... ''Así descansas tú en su virtud'' Literally: this way you (can)rest in her virtue. Real meaning, judging from the text, beginning to the end of document: '' this way you don't have to be worried/ be concerned, about her virtuousness’’ | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 1 "No, | Punctuation ''No;... | axies | |
He | Spelling ...no one... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
wore all the paramours | Mistranslations verb to wear= to have worn (p.t.) | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
+1 looked as one that so many others sought to wallop. | Mistranslations also inappropriate choice of word: "wallop" | amanda moody | |
find you | Mistranslations that this sentence looks incomplete to me until we add to it - find you HERE. in this place etc Reason being that the verb ''encontrar (se)'' in Romance languages means actually to meet instead of to find. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend didn't find what he was looking for, and from what I gathered, it's because he wasn't looking for anything, which is precisely what happens to a lot of other people. Yes, some mothers were looking for their daughters, and some husbands their wives, but not one daughter was searching for their mother, nor one wife their husband. Perhaps they've fallen asleep in some room, people were saying, amidst the confusion... It's possible, I'd say to myself, but unlikely. A mask shot over toward me. “Is it you?” It asked mysteriously. “It's me.” I replied, making sure not to lie. “I recognised the domino; but tonight is impossible; Paquita's there; and the husband has insisted on coming; we don't know where the hell he found tickets. What a shame! But look, what luck! We found you, and not daring to talk to you in person she's sent me to tell you that tomorrow you'll see each other without fail at The Frying Pan... Red domino with white bows...” “Okay.” “You there?” “I'll make it.” “And your wife, man?” Said a black domino arm in arm with another to a weird creature that was dressed from head to toe in little cornucopias. “She'll be sleeping now; as much as I try, I can't convince her to come; there's no killjoy like her.” “This way you can rest in virtue of her absence; are you planning on staying here all night?” “No, until four.” “Good idea.” Meanwhile the man with the little horns of plenty had walked off, and I half-heard these words: “He didn't suspect a thing.” “How was it possible? If I left an hour after he...” “Did he say four o'clock? “Yes.” “We've got time. Are you sure about the maid?” “She doesn't care at all, because...” A crowd scuppered my eavesdropping; the rest of the words in that conversation got muddled up with the repetitive voices: “do you know me? I know you,” etcetera, etc. Didn’t it seem like a sign that I’d brought exactly the same domino as all the paramours tonight? Definitely luckier than Quevedo who looked like a ghoul to everyone that was waiting to beat him up. “Hey! Hey! At last, I've found you” another slender mask said to me, clinging hold of my arm, and in a voice tender and shaken by the fulfilled expectations. “Have you been looking for me for long?” “No actually, I wasn't expecting to find you.” | Entry #16051 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Britishbritish
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+2 1 What a shame! But look, what luck! | Flows well You clearly distinguished the bad luck of Paquita's husband attending with the good luck of stumbling upon "Larra". | Michael torhan (X) | |
-4 3 The Frying Pan | Other This seems to be a Larra's humor. That if you go out with someone else's wife then you run the risk of "winding up in the frying pan (paying the consequences)". As such, I prefer this translation rather than leaving the original "sartén". | Michael torhan (X) | |
Said a black domino arm in arm with another to a weird creature that was dressed from head to toe in little cornucopias | Other One of the few that has understood the sentence structure. | Ana Maria Edlin No agrees/disagrees | |
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| Grammar errors past tense: it was... | axies | |
-2 +2 3 th | Omission ..for | axies | |
-1 +1 2 fe | Spelling ibid; ..for | axies | |
Perhaps they've fallen asleep in some room, people were saying, amidst the confusion... It's possible, I'd say to myself, but unlikely. | Mistranslations By changing the order of these paragraphs the sentences lack of veracity and style and does not show/appear to be a dialogue or monologue. the text becomes impersonal and full of ambiguities. i.e. people were saying, amidst the confusion... and so on. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 1 shot | Mistranslations running...in haste... in a hurry = a correr; con prisa; | axies | |
It | Spelling incorrect capital "I" | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
and | Other extra | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
found | Grammar errors wrong verb: ''We saw you...'' | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
she's | Grammar errors ...she has... doesn't equal ''she's'' | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
Red | Spelling ...reddish (adj) | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
“She'll be sleeping now | Mistranslations There is a certain degree of doubt in -''Durmiendo estará ahora.'' that can't be seen in this corresponding English sentence. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
can't | Grammar errors ast tense.: couldn't... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
killjoy | Mistranslations ''kiljoy'' insinuates a trouble maker. Unknown to the reader. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
“This way you can rest in virtue of her absence | Mistranslations ''Así descansas tú en su virtud'' Literally: this way you (can)rest in her virtue. Real meaning, judging from the text, beginning to the end of document: '' this way you don't have to be worried/ be concerned, about her virtuousness’’ => Is this a sarcastic comment/remark to the husband out having f | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
He | Spelling ...no one... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
A crowd scuppered my eavesdropping | Mistranslations Lacks of clarity; chain/wave/surge of words/thoughts, etc,. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
+2 clinging hold of my arm | Mistranslations clinging/holding on to/of my arm... | axies | |
| My friend didn’t find what he was looking for, and, as far as I could gather, this consisted of him not looking for anything, which is precisely what happens to many others. It is true that some mothers would look for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but not one daughter would look for her mother, nor one wife for her husband. “Maybe” they would say, “they’ve fallen asleep on a sofa somewhere in the crowd…” “It’s possible” I would say to myself, “but not very likely.” A mask came lurching towards me. “Is that you?” it asked me mysteriously. “It is,” I answered, safe in the knowledge that I was not lying. “I recognised the domino mask; but tonight it’s impossible; Paquita is there; but her husband has got it into his head to come along; we don’t know where the hell he found tickets. A great shame! What an opportunity! We saw you, and as she doesn’t dare to come and speak to you herself, she has sent me to tell you that tomorrow without fail we will see you in la Sartén…Red domino mask and white bows…” “All right.” “Are you coming?” “I’ll be there.” “Where’s your wife, man?” a black domino mask holding another the same by the arm was saying to a very strange being dressed all over in an abundance of little horns. “She’ll be sleeping now; try as I might, I couldn’t convince her to come; nobody hates fun quite as much as she does.” “So you’re leaving her to her virtue; are you thinking of staying here all night?” “No, till four.” “Quite right.” With this, the man with the horns had moved away, and I caught these words: “He doesn't suspect a thing.” “How could he? I left an hour after him…” “At four, did he say?” “Yes.” “We have time. Are you sure about the maid?” “There’s no need to worry, because…” A crowd of people broke my line of curiosity; the other words in the conversation were lost in the confusion of voices repeating “do you recognise me?” “I know you,” etc. Wasn’t it just my luck to have brought with me a domino mask exactly the same as that of all the lovers tonight – better luck, though, than Quevedo, who at night looked just like those waiting to be beaten? “Psst! Psst! At last I’ve found you” another slender mask said, clinging onto my arm, in a tender voice excited by fulfilled hope. “Had you been looking for me for long?” “No, actually, because I wasn’t expecting to find you.” | Entry #16774 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Britishbritish
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-1 +1 2 a black domino mask holding another the same by the arm was saying to a very strange being dressed all over in an abundance of little horns. | Flows well One of the few who understood the sentence. | Ana Maria Edlin | |
“She’ll be sleeping now; try as I might, I couldn’t convince her to come; nobody hates fun quite as much as she does. | Good term selection I like very much because the translation is given the meaning in spanish | Catherine-VG No agrees/disagrees | |
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this consisted of him | Spelling too winded for no reason | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 would look for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but not one daughter would look for her mother, nor one wife for her h | Grammar errors were''looking for; searching for; trying to find, etc, etc,.’’ Also in English the verbs need to be repeated, otherwise doesn't make sense to the reader. i.e. ...some mothers were looking for... and some husbands were looking for/ searching... and so on | axies | |
they would say, | Grammar errors again this is happening now. Prog. form of the verb; ''...they were saying... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
sofa | Mistranslations room/b/room | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
in the crowd | Mistranslations as before | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| Mistranslations inappropriate use of "it" when referring to a person | amanda moody | |
domino mask | Mistranslations The excerpt doesn't tell the whole story (available online). "Careta" is used for mask. Plus, in attendance are a Moor, an Oscar statue, an Edipus, a Vestal Virgen, a Roman, a New World Indian and 100 Black Dominós, so dominó is a costume. | Michael torhan (X) No agrees/disagrees | |
s got it into his head | Mistranslations | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
we will see you | Grammar errors should be "you will see each other" | Rose Berbeo No agrees/disagrees | |
leaving her to her virtue | Mistranslations ''Así descansas tú en su virtud'' Literally: this way you (can)rest in her virtue. Real meaning, judging from the text, beginning to the end of document: '' this way you don't have to be worried/ be concerned, about her virtuousness’’ => Is this a sarcastic comment | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
“He | Mistranslations no one... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
him | Mistranslations ...una hora después que él... que él se habia... que él tomó su café. Oración indeterminada | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
tonight | Syntax tonight is in the wrong place; ...have brought with me tonight... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
actually | Other ''No; actually not;... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
find | Other this sentence looks incomplete to me until we add to it - find you HERE. in this place, and so on; Reason being that the verb ''encontrar (se)'' in Romance languages means actually to meet instead of to find. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| Non-finalist entries The following entries were not selected by peers to advance to finals-round voting. My friend didn’t find what he was looking for which, as I eventually realised, was because he wasn’t looking for anything, just like so many other people. Granted, there were mothers looking for their daughters, and husbands looking for their wives, but not a single daughter was looking for her mother, nor one wife for her husband. Perhaps, so they were saying, they’re asleep in a room somewhere with all this commotion going on … Possible, I thought, but unlikely. A mask came shooting toward me. - Is that you? – it asked me mysteriously. - It certainly is – I replied, safe in the knowledge that I wasn’t lying. - I recognised the mask. It’s impossible tonight. Paquita’s over there, but somehow or other her husband’s shown up; we don’t know how on earth he got hold of tickets. Such a shame, just think, what a missed opportunity! We saw you, but she didn’t dare speak to you herself, so she sent me over to tell you she’ll see you tomorrow at the Sartén without fail… The one in the red mask with the white bows … - Fine. - You’ll be there? - How could I miss it? - And what about your wife, eh? addressing a bizarre creature, who was completely covered with little horns of plenty, wearing a black mask and leading another black-masked being by the arm. - She’ll be asleep by now. Try as I might, I simply couldn’t persuade her to come. There’s no one who hates a good party more. - That’s good. Now you can relax, knowing she’s such an honourable woman. Are you thinking of staying all night? - Only until four. - Good for you. At this point, as the man with the little horns walked away, I overheard them say: - He didn’t suspect a thing. - I couldn’t believe it! If I leave an hour after him … - Did he say four? - Yes. - There’ll be enough time. Can we trust the maid? - Absolutely no worries, because … A wave of sound broke the drift of my curiosity leaving the rest of the conversation lost in a babble of exchanges – “Who do you think I am?” “I know who you are”. And so it went on. So was it fate that the mask I was wearing that night made me look like all the other gallants? I was luckier than Quevedo, it’s true, who in the dark, looked like the husbands waiting to land one on their wives’ lovers. - Psst, psst! I’ve found you at last – whispered another slender, masked mortal as she took me by the arm, her voice soft and eager, transmuted by hope fulfilled. Have you been looking for me for ages? - Not at all. Actually, I wasn’t expecting to find you. | Entry #21277 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Britishbritish
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-1 1 asleep in a room somewhere with all this commotion going on | Flows well | Michael torhan (X) | |
A mask came shooting toward me. | Flows well | keelin feeney No agrees/disagrees | |
one in the red | Other But the translations that use "red" for "encarnado" may in fact be what Larra originally meant. This is probably the single most subjective line in the entire source excerpt. | Michael torhan (X) No agrees/disagrees | |
There’s no one who hates a good party more. | Flows well | Laurie Munslow No agrees/disagrees | |
So was it fate that the mask I was wearing that night made me look like all the other gallants? | Flows well | Laurie Munslow No agrees/disagrees | |
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-1 1 for which | Punctuation for, which... | axies | |
Granted | Mistranslations not ''granted''; yes,...sure; certain; assuredly; without a doubt, etc. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 1 they’re asleep in a room somewhere with all this commotion going on … Possible, I thought, but unlikely. | Mistranslations totally disagree. It says something else! mistranslation. | axies | |
shooting toward me. | Mistranslations running...in haste... in a hurry = a correr; con prisa; | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| Mistranslations inappropriate use of "it" when referring to a person | amanda moody | |
mask | Mistranslations The excerpt doesn't tell the whole story (available online). "Careta" is used for mask. Plus, in attendance are a Moor, an Oscar statue, an Edipus, a Vestal Virgen, a Roman, a New World Indian and 100 Black Dominós, so dominó is a costume. | Michael torhan (X) No agrees/disagrees | |
The one in the red mask with the white bows … | Inconsistencies I think she is joking here, like saying "two lovebirds sauteed to a crispy finish";associating sartén & encarnado. Larra is too good a writer to leave so much distance between introducing Paquita and saying she's in red. Plus, there are 100 identical black dominós in the story, so why one red one? | Michael torhan (X) No agrees/disagrees | |
addressing a bizarre creature, who was completely covered with little horns of plenty, wearing a black mask and leading another black-masked being by the arm. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend did not find what he was looking for, the fact being that he was not actually looking for anything, or so I came to infer, and this was the selfsame situation in which many of the other guests found themselves. Admittedly, a few mothers were looking for their daughters, and a few husbands for their wives; yet not a single daughter was looking for her mother, nor a single wife for her husband. "They might have fallen asleep in one of the rooms amid all the confusion," they mused. “It is possible,” I said to myself, “though unlikely.” A mask made a dash for me. “Is that you?” it asked, mysteriously. “It is I,” I rejoined, confident of uttering no lie. “I recognized your domino, but tonight is impossible. Paquita is over there, but her husband has insisted on coming along. We cannot think how on earth he got hold of the tickets. What a great pity! Such an opportunity! We saw you and, not daring to speak to you herself, she sent me to say that she will see you at the Sartén tomorrow without fail. Crimson domino and white ribbons.” “Very well.” “Then you will be there?" “Indeed I will.” “And your wife, sir?” The mask, who wore a black domino and led another identical domino by the arm, was addressing an eccentric-looking character dressed entirely in little cornucopias. “Sound asleep by now. Despite my best efforts, I could not persuade her to come. No one is more averse to a bit of fun than she.” “Then you can depend on her virtue. Are you planning to be here all night?” “No, until four.” “Very wise.” At this, the cornucopia figure moved on, and I overheard the following exchange: "He didn’t suspect a thing.” “How could he? Why, I didn’t leave home until an hour after he left.” “At four, did he say?” “Yes.” “We have time. Can you be sure of the maid?” “We have nothing to worry about, because...” A surge of people severed the thread of my curiosity and whatever came next was drowned amid the murmur of voices repeating, “Do you know who I am?”, “I know who you are” and so on. Surely it was my destiny — and a happier one than Quevedo’s, incidentally — to have brought along a domino identical to those worn by all the lovers that night, so that in the dark I looked exactly like any other domino anticipating an illicit liaison? “Psst! Psst! I have found you at last,” said another, slender mask, clutching my arm and speaking in a voice that was tender and tremulous with satisfied expectations. “Have you been looking for me for long?” “Actually, no, for I did not expect to find you.” | Entry #21619 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Britishbritish
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+2 2 depend on her virtue. | Good term selection Agreed. Larra is suggesting that tonight's party guests are anything but virtuous. But because the wife stays home she remains chaste. | Michael torhan (X) | |
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the fact being that he was not actually looking for anything, or so I came to infer, | Mistranslations There is in this passage, an urge to depart from the original to show a creative side. That is the work of authors. I believe that there is no need to change the order of the Spanish sentence (as it was) into English, and in fact it makes sense to follow the same pattern as it is being narrated as a | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
Admittedly, | Mistranslations not in original doc. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
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few | Spelling some... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
-2 2 wife for | Spelling In English the verbs need to be repeated, otherwise doesn't make sense to the reader. i.e. ...some mothers were looking for... and some husbands were looking for/ searching... and so on | axies | |
they mused. | Mistranslations not in original doc. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
it | Spelling Is it an ''it' or a person'? On the safe side:=> mysteriously, asked me. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
rejoined | | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
“Then you will be there?" | | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
“Indeed I will.” | Mistranslations re above: ¿estás? short for: (si) ¿estás de acuerdo? | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
The mask, | Mistranslations not in original doc. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
“How could he? Why, I didn’t leave home until an hour after he left.” | Mistranslations How was that possible? If I left... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
a | Punctuation | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 +1 1 anticipating an illicit liaison | Mistranslations | amanda moody | |
w | Punctuation comma | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend couldn’t find what he was looking for, and I began to assume that it was because he wasn’t looking for anything; many other people were in exactly the same situation. Of course, some mothers were searching for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but no daughter was looking for her mother nor was any wife looking for her husband. Maybe they have fallen asleep in one of the rooms amidst the chaos... they would say. Possibly, I thought to myself, but not likely. One of the masks hurried up to me. “Is it you?” It asked cryptically. “Yes” I replied, with the assurance of one who is telling the truth. “I recognised the domino mask... but it’s impossible tonight... Paquita is there... but the husband has ruined it by coming... we’ve no idea where the devil he found tickets. It’s such a shame! Oh, what an opportunity! We saw you, but she didn’t dare come and speak to you herself so she sent me to tell you she’ll see you in the Sartén tomorrow...in a red mask with white ribbons...” “Ok.” “Will you be there?” “I’ll be there.” “Where’s your wife?” Someone asked a strange being who was wearing little cornucopias, a black mask accompanied by another the same. “She’ll be sleeping now, i tried everything but couldn’t persuade her to come – she’s fun’s greatest enemy.” “You can relax then in the knowledge she’s safely asleep in bed. Are you going to stay here all night?” “No, just until four.” “That’s good.” At that point, the one with the cornucopias had moved away and I heard, slightly muffled, “He doesn’t suspect a thing” “How can that be? If I left an hour after him...” “At four did he say?” “Yes” “We have time. Are you sure about the maid?” “There’s nothing to worry about because...” A sudden flood of people broke my concentration, and the rest of the conversation was lost amongst the background of voices repeating, “Do you recognise me? I recognise you!”. Although admittedly more fortunate than Quevedo, wasn’t it just my luck, I thought, to have worn a domino mask like all the other lovers, which at night resembled all those they were waiting to beat up? “Pssst... Found you at last!” a slender mask said to me, grabbing hold of my arm, “have you been looking for me for long” asked the voice, tender and trembling with excitement and satisfaction. “Well no, not really, because I didn’t expect to find you.” | Entry #20284 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Britishbritish
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were in exactly the same situation | Mistranslations Not exactly ... what happens to other people... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
+1 Possibly, I thought to myself, but not likely. | Mistranslations ''It's possible...but not likely''; I said to myself. | axies | |
domino mask | Mistranslations The excerpt doesn't tell the whole story (available online). "Careta" is used for mask. Plus, in attendance are a Moor, an Oscar statue, an Edipus, a Vestal Virgen, a Roman, a New World Indian and 100 Black Dominós, so dominó is a costume. | Michael torhan (X) No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 1 the devil | Mistranslations I don't like "devil" here too much. "Heck" works better for me. | Ira Saied | |
+1 1 Someone asked a strange being who was wearing little cornucopias, a black mask accompanied by another the same. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin | |
waiting to beat up | Mistranslations | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend did not find what he was looking for, and just as I had come to suspect, this was due to the fact that he wasn’t looking for anything. Which is precisely what happens to many others. Yes, some mothers searched for their daughters and a few husbands for their wives, but there was not a single daughter looking for her mother, nor a single wife looking for her husband. Perhaps, they said, they have fallen asleep in another room, amidst the disorder. Possibly, I said to myself, but probably not. A mask came swiftly towards me. “Is that you?” it asked mysteriously. “Yes, it is I.” I replied, certain of not lying. “I recognised your dominó but tonight is impossible: Paquita is over there. Furthermore, her husband has insisted on coming and we have no idea how the devil he found tickets. Such a shame! And what an opportunity! We saw you, but as she doesn’t dare come and talk to you in person, she has sent me to tell you that tomorrow without fail, you’ll meet in the Sartén. Wear your flesh coloured cloak with white bows...” “Alright.” “You’ll be there?” “I wouldn’t miss it.” “And where’s your wife, sir?” he asked a very strange apparition dressed entirely in little horns of plenty, a black dominó holding another by its arm. “She’ll be asleep by now. Despite all my efforts I couldn’t make her decide to come. I can’t think of anyone more averse to entertainment.” “And so you may rest assured of her virtue. Are you planning to stay here all night?” “No, just until four.” “Good for you.” And with that, the fellow dressed in tiny horns moved away and I discerned these words: “He suspects nothing.” “How could he? I left an hour after him...” “Did he say until four?” “Yes.” “We have time. Do you trust the maid? “There’s no need to worry, because...” A waft broke the thread of my curiosity and the rest of the conversation became confused with the repeated phrases of ‘do you recognise me? I recognise you’, and so on, and so on. Well, how fortunate was I to have worn the same dominó as all the lovers? In fact, more fortunate than Quevedo, since by night I looked just like all the others trying to get closer to one another. “Tut-tut! At last I’ve found you!” said another slender mask, taking my arm, and with a voice both tender and shaking with the relief of hope satisfied, asked: “Have you been looking for me for long?” “Indeed not, as I hardly expected to find you.” | Entry #16154 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Britishbritish
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rest assured of her virtue | Good term selection Agreed. Larra is suggesting that tonight's party guests are anything but virtuous. But because the wife stays home she remains chaste. | Michael torhan (X) No agrees/disagrees | |
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-1 1 said | Grammar errors ...they were saying... maybe aloud to each other | axies | |
-1 1 Possibly, I said to myself, but probably not. | Other this sentence lacks of veracity and style and does not show/appear to be a monologue. the text becomes impersonal etc,.''It's possible...but not likely''; I said to myself. | axies | |
-1 1 it | Mistranslations Is it an ''it' or a person'? On the safe side:=> mysteriously, asked me. | axies | |
-1 +2 2 he asked a very strange apparition dressed entirely in little horns of plenty, a black dominó holding another by its arm | Mistranslations | Laurie Munslow | |
| My friend did not find what he was looking for, and, as I eventually deduced, it was because he was not looking for anything, which was precisely what was occurring with many others. It was true that some mothers were looking for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but there was not a single daughter looking for her mother, nor a single wife her husband. “Perhaps,” they were saying, “in the confusion the women have fallen asleep in some room or other…” “Maybe,” I said to myself, “But unlikely.” A mask hurried towards me. “Is it you?” it asked mysteriously. “It is me,” I replied, certain that I was not lying. “I recognised the domino; but tonight is impossible; Paquita is here; her husband insisted on coming too, we don’t know where on earth he got a ticket from. More’s the pity! It would have been such a good opportunity, don’t you think! We saw you but as she didn’t dare speak to you herself, she sent me to tell you that tomorrow without fail you can meet her at the Sartén… Flesh-coloured domino and white bows.” “Fine.” “Will you be there?” “Without fail.” “And your wife?” she said to a very odd-looking being who had decorated his black domino with a myriad of tiny horns, and was carrying another similar one on his arm. “She’ll be in bed by now; I tried my utmost to persuade her to come but she wouldn’t; no-one detests amusement more than she does.” “Well your conscience is clear. Will you stay all night?” “No, just until four.” “You’re doing the right thing.” At that the man with the little horns went off and I overheard the following exchange: “He suspects nothing.” “How could he? I went out an hour after him.” “Four he said?” “Yes.” “That gives us time. Can the maid be trusted?” “No need to worry about that, because…” A surge of people disturbed my snooping activities; the remainder of the conversation was lost in a hubbub of voices: Do you know who I am? I know who you are…etcetera, etc. So it seemed, did it not, that my lucky star had failed to bring me that evening a domino equal to that of all those lovers, which, in happier circumstances than Quevedo’s, made its appearance at night for those who were hoping to be united? “Psst! Psst! At last I’ve found you,” said a slender mask, taking me firmly by the arm, her tender voice betraying the excitement of expectation fulfilled. “Have you been looking for me for long?” “No actually, because I didn’t expect to find you.” | Entry #21809 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Britishbritish
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-1 1 the women | Mistranslations This is what the daughters or wives would be saying about their mothers/husbands as an excuse not to look for them - so not "the women" | James Peel | |
-2 +2 3 it | Mistranslations inappropriate when referring to a person | amanda moody | |
+1 1 she said to a very odd-looking being who had decorated his black domino with a myriad of tiny horns, and was carrying another similar one on his arm. | Mistranslations | James Peel | |
Well your conscience is clear | Mistranslations | James Peel No agrees/disagrees | |
hoping to be united | Mistranslations | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend did not find what he was seeking because, as I began to suspect, he was not looking for anything, which is exactly what happens to many people. Some mothers, of course, went looking for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but not one daughter searched for her mother, not one wife for her husband. Perhaps, they thought, they may have fallen asleep in some room during the confusion...It's possible, I said to myself, but not likely. A mask suddenly came toward me. "Is it you?" it asked mysteriously. "Yes," I replied, confident I was not lying. "I recognized the cloak; but tonight will not work. Paquita is there, but her husband insisted on coming. We don't know where in hell he found tickets. It's a real shame! What an opportunity! We saw you, and since she didn't dare to tell you herself, she sent me to say that she will see you tomorrow without fail at the Skillet...red cape with white cords." "Fine." "Will you be there?" "By all means." "And your wife, man?" he inquired of an extremely strange being costumed entirely in little cornucopiae, a black cloak with an identical one on his arm. "She would be sleeping now; try as I might, I could not convince her to come; no one can surpass her in detesting amusement." "So you can rest easy in her virtue. Do you expect to be here all night?" "No, just until four." "Right, then." With that he moved away from the cornucopia man and I managed to hear the following: "He didn't suspect anything." "How could that be possible? Since I left an hour later than he..." "He said at four?" "Yes." "There is time. Are you sure about the maid?" "No reason to worry, because..." A wave cut off the thread of my curiosity, as repeating voices jumbled the remaining words of the dialog: Do you recognize me? I know you, and so on. For it appeared to be my good fortune that the cloak I was wearing that night was identical to those all lovers wore. Was I not luckier, without a doubt, than Quevedo, who by night resembled so many who sought to assail them? "Sssh! Quiet! At last I found you," said another slender mask, grasping my arm, and with a delicate voice trembling from a hope achieved. "Have you been looking for me long?" "Of course not, since I did not expect to find you." | Entry #18431 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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went | Grammar errors ...were looking | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
, | Punctuation ...and, for emphases. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
Perhaps, they thought | Mistranslations ...they were saying... maybe aloud | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
he | Omission all the confusion | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 1 .It's possible, I said to myself, but not likely. | Other This paragraph lacks of style and does not show/appear to be a monologue. Maybe?: ''It's possible...but not likely''; I said to myself. | axies | |
it | Other Is it an ''it' or a person'? On the safe side:=> mysteriously, asked me. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
cloak; but tonight will not work | Other no need for transcreation | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
in | Syntax where/how...the hell... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
ti | Omission ...the tickets. (The tickets for the show) | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 1 red cape with white cords." | Mistranslations Reddish domino with white bows. | axies | |
+2 1 he inquired of an extremely strange being costumed entirely in little cornucopiae, a black cloak with an identical one on his arm. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin | |
virtue | Other ...virtuousness;trust in her. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
, | Punctuation No;... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
With that he moved away from the cornucopia man | Mistranslations the other way; ... ''el de cornecillos'' moves away | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
the following | Omission ...the following words: or ...what follows: | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
A wave | Other A wave? Lacks of clarity; chain/wave of words/thoughts... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
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so many who sought | Mistranslations ...no matter who... like any other/anyone... etc,. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend didn't find what he was looking for and, as I came to suspect, it was because he wasn't really looking for anything, which is precisely what happens to so many others. Some mothers were looking for their daughters, and some husbands their wives, but not a single daughter was looking for her mother, nor a single woman her husband. “Perhaps”, they said, “they've fallen asleep amid the confusion in some room...” “It's possible”, I said to myself, “but it's not likely”. A mask came racing up to me. “Is it you?” it asked me mysteriously. “It is I”, I replied, quite sure I wasn't lying. “I met the domino; but tonight is impossible; Paquita is over there; but her husband insisted on coming; we don't know where the hell he found tickets. What a shame! What an opportunity! We saw you, but she didn't dare talk to you herself, so she sent me to tell you that she will definitely meet you tomorrow at Sartén... Domino incarnate and white bows...” “Good.” “Are you in?” “I'll be there.” “And your wife, man?”, he said to an extremely rare being that was completely dressed in little cornucopias, a black domino that had another just like him on his arm. “She's probably sleeping now; no matter what I did, I couldn't convince her to come; no one hates having a good time more than she does.” “So you rely on her virtue; do you plan to be here all night?” “No, until four.” “That's good.” At that point the one with the little horns wandered away, and I overheard these words: “He suspected nothing.” “How is that possible? If I left an hour after he did...” “At four you said?” “Yes.” “We have time. Do you trust the maid?” “No worries, because...” A wave interrupted the thread of my curiosity; the other words of the dialogue were mingled with the repeated voices of: do you know me? I know you, et cetera, etc. “Wasn't is just stellar of me to wear a black Domino tonight, just like all the lovers, luckier, by the way, than Quevedo, who at night looked like all those who were waiting to beat them?” “Psst! Psst! I finally found you”, another slender mask said to me, taking hold of my arm, and in a tender voice, charged with the excitement of hope realized. “Were you looking for me a long time?” “Not really, because I didn't really expect to find you.” | Entry #20416 — Discuss 0 — Variant: USuseng
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-2 2 incarnate | Good term selection Agreed. When reading beyond this excerpt, this article is all about the "black dominos". Red is not the translation because red is out of place for the story. Besides, Paquita's friend would not be suggesting tomorrow's attire. | Michael torhan (X) | |
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s th | Omission prep;...for... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
man he | Spelling ibid;prep;...for... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
they said | Grammar errors ...they were saying... maybe aloud to each other, because the narrator in the doc. is hearing them | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
+1 1 it | Spelling impersonal; | axies | |
-1 1 he said to an extremely rare being that was completely dressed in little cornucopias, a black domino that had another just like him on his arm. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia | Ana Maria Edlin | |
no matter what I did | Grammar errors | Sophie Cherel No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 1 more | Syntax this ''more'' should be at the beginning of: No one hates ''more,''... | axies | |
” | Punctuation This doesn't seem to be dialogue, but rather a continuation of the internal monologue. | Kate Fortin No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 1 Were you looking for me a long time? | Grammar errors "for a long time" or "for long"; "looking for a long time" doesn't sound like native English. | Jenny Westwell | |
| My friend didn’t find what he was looking for and, from what I could gather, the fact was that he wasn’t looking for anything, which is exactly the same as what happened with many other people. Yes, some mothers were looking for their daughters and some husbands their wives, however not one single daughter was looking for her mother and not one single wife was looking for her husband. Perhaps —they said,—they have fallen to sleep amongst the confusion in one of the rooms... It’s possible—I said to myself,—but it’s not very likely. A mask came hurtling towards me. —Is that you?—it asked me mysteriously. —It’s me—I replied certain that I wasn’t lying. —I recognized your domino but tonight it’s impossible. Paquita is here but her husband has insisted on coming. We don’t know how the devil he got the tickets. Such a great pity! It would have been such a good opportunity! We saw you and as she didn’t dare speak to you herself, she has sent me to tell you that she will see you tomorrow in the Sartén without fail… Red domino with white bows... —Good. —Agreed? —I’ll be there. —And your wife?—a very odd being dressed entirely in horns of plenty said to a black domino wearing another the same on his arm. —She will be sleeping at this time; as much as I tried I haven’t been able to persuade her to come; no-one is a greater enemy of having fun than her. —So you are excused by her virtue. Are you thinking of staying here all night? —No, until four o’clock. —Quite right. At this point the man dressed in little horns had moved away and I half-heard these words: —He hasn’t suspected anything. —How could he? If I left an hour after he did... —Did he say until four o’clock? —Yes. —We have time. Are you sure about the maid? —There’s nothing to worry about, because... A surge of people interrupted the thread of my curiosity and the rest of the dialogue became confused amongst voices repeating: do you recognize me? I recognize you, etcetera, etc. Well wasn’t I just fortunate to be wearing the same domino as all the lovers, and certainly happier than Quevedo who by night was confused with someone everyone else wanted to hit? —Psst! Psst! At last I’ve found you—said another graceful mask, taking me by the arm with a gentle voice, excited at having satisfied her hopes. Have you been looking for me long? —Certainly not, because I didn’t expect to find you. | Entry #21665 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Britishbritish
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from what I could gather | Good term selection This word choice works for me. | Ira Saied No agrees/disagrees | |
has insisted on | Flows well I wish I had thought of this! | Michael torhan (X) No agrees/disagrees | |
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| Omission ...were looking for/ searching for... | axies | |
| Mistranslations Now and then -they were saying... | axies | |
it | Other Is it an ''it' or a person'? On the safe side:=> mysteriously, asked me | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
domino | Mistranslations Dominó is like a cape | Kate Fortin No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 1 tickets | Spelling The source text is ambiguous. Billete is usually money in Latin America. In Spain they use it to mean ticket, but that is far from being universal. | Ira Saied | |
+2 1 a very odd being dressed entirely in horns of plenty said to a black domino wearing another the same on his arm. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin | |
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+1 —So you are excused by her virtue | Other —''Así descansas tú en su virtud'' Literally: this way you (can)rest in her virtue. Real meaning, judging from the text, beginning to the end of document: '' this way you don't have to be worried/ be concerned, about her virtuousness’’ =>Is this a sarcastic comment/remark to the husband out having f | axies | |
, | Punctuation No; | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| Mistranslations ... wave/chain of thoughts... | axies | |
to find you | | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend did not find what he was looking for and, as I had come to suspect, it turned out he was not looking for anything, which is exactly what he tells people. Yes, some mothers were looking for their daughters, and some husbands, their wives; but not one single daughter was looking for her mother, not one single wife, her husband. “Perhaps,” they were saying, “they fell asleep amid the confusion, in one of the rooms.” … “It's possible,” I said to myself. “But not likely.” A masked figure hurried over to me. “Is that you?” he asked mysteriously. “It’s me,” I answered, careful not to lie. “I met the domino, but tonight it’s impossible. Francesca is here, not to mention her husband insisted on coming; we don’t know where on earth he came up with the cash. Pity! But look at this! We’ve found you, and, not daring to talk to you herself, she sends me to tell you you’ll see each other, without fail, at Skillets tomorrow … as a live domino, with white ties … “Fine.” “You’re in?” “I’ll be there.” “And how about your wife, man?” said a black domino with another, identical one on his arm, to a bizarre creature who had come dressed entirely in miniature horns of plenty. "She’s probably asleep. As hard as I tried, I couldn’t convince her to come. No one hates fun more than she does." "So you get to relax on her behalf. You plan to be here all night?" "No, just until four." "You’re smart." With that, he moved away from mini horns, and I half-heard these words: “He didn’t suspect a thing.” “How is that possible? If I left a half an hour after he …" “At four, he said?” “Yes.” “We have time. Are you sure about the maid?” “There isn’t any security, because …” A surge of people cut my line of curiosity. The remaining words of dialogue were mixed in with repetitions of: “Do you know me? I know you,” et cetera, etc. Well, wasn’t it just my luck tonight to have brought a domino, the same as every other lover? Of course, I was better off than Quevedo, who would come out at night to hit those waiting for him. “Hey, I finally found you!” said another svelte masked figure, taking me by the arm, her voice at once tender and excited with hope fulfilled. “Were you looking for me long?” "Of course not, because I did not expect to find you." | Entry #19198 — Discuss 0 — Variant: USuseng
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A masked figure hurried over to me. | Flows well | keelin feeney No agrees/disagrees | |
+1 1 said a black domino with another, identical one on his arm, to a bizarre creature who had come dressed entirely in miniature horns of plenty. | Flows well One of the few who understood the sentence. | Ana Maria Edlin | |
She’s probably asleep. | Flows well Good catch. Most of my Spanish-speaking friends are Mexican, so I've only read about Spain's use of the future tense for supposition. | Michael torhan (X) No agrees/disagrees | |
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| Syntax ''looking for; searching for; trying to find, etc, etc,.’’ Also in English the verbs need to be repeated, otherwise doesn't make sense to the reader. i.e. ...some mothers were looking for... and some husbands were looking for/ searching... and so on | axies | |
he | Other is it a he a she or a it? mysteriously, asked me. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| Mistranslations Sure of not lying; Sure that I wasn't lying; | axies | |
Francesca | Spelling | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
cash | Mistranslations the tickets. (the tickets for this particular event) | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
Pity | Omission Great pity! | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
But look at this | Mistranslations What an opportunity lost! | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
u yo | Omission that... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
Skillets | Spelling ??? | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
as a | Mistranslations extra to original | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
"So you get to relax on her behal | Mistranslations transcreation! | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
brought a domino | Mistranslations | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
Hey | Other psst! Psst! | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend did not find what he was searching for, and, as I supposed it was because he was not looking for anything, exactly as occurred with many others. A number of mothers were looking for their daughters, and some husbands their wives, but not a single daughter searched for her mother, nor a single woman her husband. "Perhaps", they said "they have fallen asleep in the confusion in one of the rooms..." "It's possible" I thought to myself, "but not probable". A mask came hurtling towards me. "Is it you?" it asked mysteriously. "It is I" I replied, convinced I was not lying. "I recognised the cloak, but tonight it's impossible. Paquita is here, but her husband insisted on coming; who knows where the hell he got tickets. What a shame! What timing! We saw you, but as she didn't dare talk to you herself, she sent me to tell you that tomorrow, without fail, you'll meet at La Sartén... A red cloak and white ribbons... "Fine." "You'll be there?" "Of course." "What about your wife, my friend?" I asked a very peculiar-looking being whose clothes were covered in little horns of plenty, a black cloak, exactly the same as one worn by another, on his arm. "She'll be asleep now. As hard as I tried, I was unable to convince her to come; she is the biggest enemy of fun." "So you bask in her virtue. Are you going to be here all night?" "No, until four." "Good for you." Then the horns of plenty chap moved away and I overheard these words: "He didn't suspect anything." "How is that possible? I left an hour after him..." "He said at four?" "Yes." "We've got enough time. Are you sure about the maid?" "Don't worry, because..." A wave of sound snapped the thread of my curiosity; the remaining words of that dialogue became caught up in the repeated refrains of: Do you know me? I know you, etc, etc. Wasn't it just my luck that that evening I'd worn a cloak the same as all the lovers, luckier though than Quevedo, who, at night, looked like all those who were expecting to be beaten up? "Psst! Psst! I've finally found you" another slender mask said to me, holding onto my arm, and in a soft voice, excited by the fulfilled expectation, asked "Have you been looking for me long?" "Actually no, for I didn't expect to find you." | Entry #16177 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Britishbritish
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What a shame! What timing! | Other You clearly distinguished the bad luck of Paquita's husband attending with the good luck of stumbling upon "Larra". | Michael torhan (X) No agrees/disagrees | |
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-1 supposed it was because | Syntax | axies | |
| Omission exactly...the same | axies | |
A number o | Other some... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| Omission ...for their... | axies | |
| Spelling ibid; for... | axies | |
said | Spelling progressive form; ...were saying... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 +1 1 it | Mistranslations inappropriate use of "it" when referring to a person | amanda moody | |
+2 I asked a very peculiar-looking being whose clothes were covered in little horns of plenty, a black cloak, exactly the same as one worn by another, on his arm. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin | |
virtue. | Other ''Así descansas tú en su virtud'' Literally: this way you (can)rest in her virtue. Real meaning, judging from the text, beginning to the end of document: '' this way you don't have to be worried/ be concerned, about her virtuousness’’ => Is this a sarcastic comment/remark to the husband out having f | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 1 "He | Mistranslations No one... | axies | |
| My friend did not find what he was looking for, and I came to the conclusion that he was not actually looking for anything, as it happened to so many others. Yes, some mothers were looking for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but not a single daughter was looking for her mother, and not a single wife for her husband. Perhaps in all the commotion - they said - they had fallen asleep in some room. Possible – I said to myself – but unlikely. A mask came shooting towards me. “Is this you?” the mask asked me mysteriously. “It’s me,” I replied, certain that I was not lying. “I recognized the Domino, but tonight it is impossible; Paquita is here; and the husband insisted on coming, hell knows where he got tickets. What a shame! Look, what an opportunity! We saw you, and since she dared not talk to you herself, she sent me to tell you that tomorrow, without fail, you will see each other at the “Pan”... Red Domino with white ribbons.... “Good.” “Will you be there?” “Without fail.” “And your wife, man?” he said to a most curious creature who was dressed in a mass of little horns, a black Domino, arm in arm with another one just like him. “She’s probably asleep now. No matter how I tried, I could not convince her to come. She is the archenemy of entertainment.” “So you can revel in her virtue. Do you intend to stay here all night?” “No, until four.” “Good for you.” With this, the one with the little horns had gone away, and I overheard these words: “He does not suspect anything.” “How could he? I left an hour after him…” “He said at four?” “Yes.” “We have time. Are you sure about the maid?” “No worries, because….” A wave of people cut the thread of my curiosity, the remaining words of the conversation drowned in echoing phrases of “Do you know who I am?” - “I know who you are.” and so forth. Was is not my luck to be dressed in the same Domino as all those lovers that night, happier, surely, than Quevedo, which in the darkness resembled so many who were waiting for their opportunity? “Hey! Shush! Finally I found you,” said another slender mask to me and seized my arm. With her voice that was suave and stirred by satisfied hope, she asked: “Have you been looking for me for a long time?” “Certainly not, because I wasn’t hoping to find you.” | Entry #18101 — Discuss 0 — Variant: USuseng
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said | Grammar errors ...they were saying... maybe aloud to each other, because the narrator in the doc. is hearing them | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
, | Punctuation stop: semi colon (;) | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
“Pan” | Mistranslations ??? | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
+2 1 he said to a most curious creature who was dressed in a mass of little horns, a black Domino, arm in arm with another one just like him. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin | |
“So you can revel in her virtue | Spelling —''Así descansas tú en su virtud'' Literally: this way you (can)rest in her virtue. Real meaning, judging from the text, beginning to the end of document: '' this way you don't have to be worried/ be concerned, about her virtuousness’’ =>Is this a sarcastic comment/remark to the husband out having f | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
, | Punctuation No; | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
Was is | Syntax syntax and mistranslation | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
and seized | Mistranslations ...while grabbing/getting hold etc | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend did not find what he was looking for, and as I came to believe, this consisted of not seeking anything, which is precisely the case for many others. It is true that some mothers were looking for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but not one daughter searched for her mother, and not one single woman sought her husband. Perhaps—they said—they had fallen asleep in some room amidst the confusion… It’s possible—I said to myself—but it’s not likely. A mask hastened toward me. --Is that you?--it enquired mysteriously. --It is I--I responded, certain I was telling the truth. --I met the domino; but tonight is impossible; Paquita is there; plus the husband insisted on coming; we do not know where the devil he found tickets. It’s a terrible shame! What an opportunity! We saw you, and as she dared not speak to you herself, she sent me to tell you that she would meet you on the morrow at the Sartén without fail… A masked hooded figure and white ribbons… --Very well. --Will you be there? --I would not miss it. --And your wife, good man?—it said to a strange creature dressed head to toe in horns of plenty, a black domino with another the same on its arm. --Still sleeping; despite my efforts, I was unable to convince her to come; there is no one who is more an enemy of diversion. --Thus, you make merry in her stead; do you plan to be here the whole night? --No, until four. --Rightly so. In the midst of this, the horned one had wandered off, and I overhead these words: --No one suspects. --How was that possible? I left an hour after he did… --Until four he said? --Yes. --We have time. Are you sure about the maidservant? --There is no need for concern, because.... A wave broke through my trickle of curiosity; the other words of the conversation caught up in the refrains of: Do you recognize me? I know you, etcetera, etc. Was it not lucky of me to have brought with me this night a domino the same as that of all the lovers, more fortunate, certainly, than Quevedo, who at night resembled those waiting to lay a beating on them? --Psst! psst! I finally found you—declared another slender mask, taking my arm, asking in a sweet voice quavering with sated expectation. Have you been looking for me long? --No, not at all, because I did not think to find you. | Entry #21007 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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said | Grammar errors ...they were saying... maybe aloud to each other, because the narrator in the doc. is hearing them | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
it | Other Is it an ''it' or a person'? On the safe side:=> mysteriously, asked me. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
I | Omission ...certain that... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 1 morrow | Mistranslations could confuse a lot of people including him! | axies | |
A masked hooded figure | Mistranslations Reddish domino with white bows | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
it said to | Grammar errors Is it an ''it' or a person'? | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
its | Other Is it an ''it' or a person'? | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
Still sleeping; | Mistranslations Maybe... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
diversion | Other ok; but amusement; fun; entertainment; et,. first | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
--Thus, you make merry in her stead | Mistranslations —''Así descansas tú en su virtud'' Literally: this way you (can)rest in her virtue. Real meaning, judging from the text, beginning to the end of document: '' this way you don't have to be worried/ be concerned, about her virtuousness’’ =>Is this a sarcastic comment/remark to the husband out having f | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
, | Spelling No; | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
wave | Other ... wave/ A wave? Lacks of clarity; chain/wave of words/thoughts... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
trickle | | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
caught up | | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
of me to have brought with me | Other poor choice of words (verbs) | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
+1 than Quevedo, who at night resembled those waiting to lay a beating on them | Mistranslations | lugoben | |
, | Punctuation No;... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
to find | Mistranslations ...of finding you; ...that I would find you. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend was not able to find what he was looking for, and I presumed the reason for that to be that he was not looking for anything, which is precisely what happens to so many other people. Some mothers, it is true, were looking for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but there was not a single daughter who was looking for her mother, nor a single wife for her husband. “Perhaps”, they said, “they have fallen asleep amid the confusion in one of the rooms” … “It’s possible”, I thought, “but not very likely”. A mask came rushing towards me. “Is it you?” it asked, mysteriously. “It is me” I replied, quite sure that I was not lying. “I met the domino; but it’s not possible this evening; Paquita is over there; but her husband insisted on coming; we have no idea how on earth he was able to get hold of tickets. What a crying shame! And what an opportunity it would have been! We saw you, and as she couldn’t pluck up the courage to talk to you herself, she sent me over to tell you that tomorrow without fail we’ll see you in the Sartén … A fleshy domino and white ribbons … “Fine” “Will you be there?” “I will indeed” “And your wife?” he said to a weird entity dressed in lots and lots of little horns, a black domino arm in arm with another one exactly the same. “I guess she must be sleeping now; try as I might, I couldn’t persuade her to come; no one is less interested in enjoying themselves.” “So you are resting in her virtue; are you planning to spend the whole night here? “No, only until 4.00” “Quite right too” By then the guy dressed in the little horns had slipped away, and I overheard someone say: “He didn’t suspect a thing” “How was that possible? I left an hour after him …” “At 4.00, you said?” “Yes” “We have time. Can you trust the maid?” “Nothing to fear, because …” A human wave cut my curiosity short; the remaining words of the conversation were drowned in a flood of utterances like: “Do you know me?”, “I know you”, etcetera. It seemed to be a stroke of ill luck that I had brought along a domino that looked just like all the other lovers, a happier one that Quevedo, mind you, who at night looked just like all those who were waiting to beat them up. “Hey, at last I’ve found you”, another slender mask said to me, seizing my arm, and asked me with a tender voice, trembling with satisfied longing: “Have you been looking for me for a long time?” “No, actually, because I wasn’t expecting you to be here. | Entry #16702 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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human wave cut my curiosity short | Flows well | Sophie Cherel No agrees/disagrees | |
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said | Grammar errors ...they were saying... maybe aloud to each other | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| Mistranslations inappropriate use of "it" when referring to a person | amanda moody | |
+1 he said to a weird entity dressed in lots and lots of little horns, a black domino arm in arm with another one exactly the same. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin | |
virtue | Other —''Así descansas tú en su virtud'' Literally: this way you (can)rest in her virtue. Real meaning, judging from the text, beginning to the end of document: '' this way you don't have to be worried/ be concerned, about her virtuousness’’ => Is this a sarcastic comment/remark to the husband out having | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend did not find what he was looking for, and, from what I came to presume, it was due to the fact that he wasn’t looking for anything, which is precisely the same thing that happens to many others. Some mothers, it’s true, were looking for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but not one single daughter was looking for her mother, nor one single wife for her husband. Perhaps - they said - they stayed asleep somewhere in the confusion... It’s possible - I told myself - but it’s not likely. One mask came rapidly towards me. “Is it you?”, it asked me mysteriously. “It’s me”, I answered, safe in the knowledge I wasn’t lying. “I recognised the dominó (hooded cape); but tonight is impossible; Paquita is there; the husband has made an effort to come; we don’t know where the hell he got tickets. A great pity! What an opportunity! We saw you, but she didn’t dare talk to you herself and sent me to tell you that tomorrow without fail you will see each other in the Sartén... A red dominó, with white ties... “OK”. “Do you agree?” “I’ll be there”. “And your wife, sir?” - he was speaking to a very strange entity dressed totally in cornucopias, with another dressed in a black dominó on his arm. “She will be asleep now; try as I might, I couldn’t persuade her to come; there is no-one more against fun.” “So you are enjoying a break from her virtue; do you expect to be here all night?” “No, only until four”. “That’s a good idea”. With this the one with the cornucopias had moved away and I half heard these words: “He didn’t suspect anything.” “How was it possible? If I left an hour after him...” “At four, he said?” “Yes”. “We have time. Are you sure about the maid?” “There is no problem, because...” A general commotion interrupted the flow of my curiosity; the remaining words of the dialogue mingled with the repeated calls of: do you know me? I know you, etc., etc. So did it not seem that the fates had brought me a dominó tonight equal to that of all the lovers, more felicitous certainly than Quevedo, which by night looked like so many of those waiting to strike them? “Chis! chis! Finally I’ve found you”, another individual with a slender mask said to me, grabbing my arm, with a soft voice excited by an expectation met. “Have you been looking for me long?” “No, not at all, because I didn’t expect to find you.” | Entry #15787 — Discuss 0 — Variant: UKukeng
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said | Spelling prog form: ...they were saying... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| Mistranslations inappropriate use of "it" when referring to a person | amanda moody | |
he was speaking to a very strange entity dressed totally in cornucopias, with another dressed in a black dominó on his arm. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin No agrees/disagrees | |
a break from her virtue | Mistranslations | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
the fates | Grammar errors fate shouldn't in plural | lugoben No agrees/disagrees | |
which by night looked like so many of those waiting to strike them | Mistranslations | lugoben No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend did not find what he was looking for, and as I came to suspect, it involved the fact that he was not looking for anything, which is precisely the same thing that happens with many others. Some mothers, yes, were looking for their daughters and some husbands for their wives, but not a single daughter was looking for her mother or a single wife for her husband. Perhaps they claimed that amid the confusion they might have fallen asleep somewhere.... It is possible - I have said as much myself - but it is not probable. A masquerader came hurriedly toward me. "Is that you?" she asked me mysteriously. "It is I," I responded to her, certain that I was not lying. "I recognized the domino, but tonight it is impossible. Paquita is over there, but her husband has insisted on coming; we don't know how the devil he got tickets. Dear heavens, what a mess! We just saw you, and she herself, not daring to talk to you, sent me to tell you that tomorrow without fail you will see each other at the Skillet... A blood-red domino and white ribbons... "Good." "Will you be there?" "Without fail." "And your wife, man?" she said to an odd sort who had dressed himself entirely in tiny horns of plenty, someone sporting a black domino and who was carrying a similar one on his arm. "She should be sleeping now. As hard as I tried, I was unable to convince her to come; pleasure has no greater adversary." "So you trust in her vitue. Do you expect to be here all night?" "No, until four." "Good enough." At this, she had walked away from the one covered in little cornucopias, and I overheard these words: "He suspected nothing." "How was that possible? If I left an hour after him..." "At four he said?" "Yes." "We've got time. You trust the maid?" "You don't need to worry because..." A shifting in the crowd cut my curiosity's thread, the remaining words of the exchange muddled within repetitious shoutings of, "Do you recognize me? I recognize you, et cetera, etc." But did not my star seem to have worn this night a domino similar to that of all lovers, happier, to be sure, than Quevedo, who by night resembled all of those who waited for him to accost them? "Psst! Psst! At last I've found you," another slender masquerader said to me, seizing my arm, her voice tender and set aquiver by hope satisfied. "Have you spent a long time looking for me?" "No, certainly not, since I did not expect to find you." | Entry #16096 — Discuss 0 — Variant: USuseng
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| Good term selection Agreed. By the process of deduction, Paquita's friend must be female. | Michael torhan (X) | |
+2 pleasure has no greater adversary | Flows well A good way to put it! | Michael torhan (X) | |
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-1 1 it involved the fact that | Mistranslations extra to original | axies | |
Perhaps they claimed | Punctuation The Spanish reads "Perhaps, they claimed, they might have..." | Jenny Westwell No agrees/disagrees | |
somewhere | Mistranslations ... bedroom | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
+2 1 I have said as much myself | Grammar errors "I have said as much myself" sounds wonderfully elegant but I don't think it accurately translates "yo decía para mí" here. !I have said as much myself" suggests "I have the same thing on other, previous occasions". | Jenny Westwell | |
| Mistranslations place name - should not be translated | amanda moody | |
+2 she said to an odd sort who had dressed himself entirely in tiny horns of plenty, someone sporting a black domino and who was carrying a similar one on his arm | Mistranslations | Ana Maria Edlin | |
"So you trust in her vitu | Mistranslations ''Así descansas tú en su virtud'' Literally: this way you (can)rest in her virtue. Real meaning, judging from the text, beginning to the end of document: '' this way you don't have to be worried/ be concerned, about her virtuousness’’ | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
, | Punctuation ''No''; | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
How was that possible? | Mistranslations The meaning seems to be "How could he suspect anything, when I left an hour after him?" | Jenny Westwell No agrees/disagrees | |
epetitious shoutings | Spelling it was all ash ash; | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 1 et cetera | Mistranslations one word ''etcetera'' | axies | |
did not my star seem to have worn this night a | Mistranslations | Sophie Cherel No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend didn't find what he was searching for, and from what I was able to tell, it was because he wasn't searching for anything, which is precisely what happens to many others. Yes, some mothers were searching for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but not a single daughter was searching for her mother, nor a single wife searching for her husband. "Maybe," they said, "they've fallen asleep amid the confusion in some room...." "It's possible," I was saying to myself, "but it isn't likely." A mask came flying at me. "Is it you?" it asked me mysteriously. "It is me," I responded positive I wasn't lying. "I recognized the cloak; but it's impossible tonight; Paquita is there; but her husband insisted on coming; we don't know where the hell he got tickets. What a pity! Look at what an opportunity! We saw you, and not daring to talk to you herself, she was sending me to tell you that tomorrow you'll definitely see each other at the Sartén... Cloak incarnate and white ribbons... "Good." "Are you in?" "I won't miss it." "And your wife, man?" he was saying to a very peculiar being who had dressed completely in an abundance of little horns, a black cloak arm in arm with its equal. "She's probably sleeping now; as much as I tried I wasn't able to get her to come; there's no greater enemy of good times than she." "Then take comfort in her virtue. Are you planning on staying all night?" "No. Until four o'clock." "That's good." At that point the one with the horns walked away, and I overheard these words: "He didn't suspect anything." "How is that possible? If I left an hour after him..." "He said at four?" "Yes." "We have time. Are you sure about the maid?" "There's nothing to worry about, because..." A surge cut the thread of my curiosity. The rest of the conversation got lost in the repeated voices: Do you recognize me? I recognize you, etc. etc. Well didn't it look like my stars were aligned, having brought a cloak like all the other lovers - happier, surely, than Quevedo - which at night looked like all the others waiting to pair up? "Chis! Chis! I finally found you" said another slim mask, grabbing me by the arm, and with its voice tender and emotional because of the desire fulfilled. "Have you been looking for me a long time?" "Certainly not, I didn't expect to find you." | Entry #16552 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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-3 3 incarnate | Good term selection Agreed. When reading beyond this excerpt, this article is all about the "black dominos". Red is not the translation because red is out of place for the story. Besides, Paquita's friend would not be suggesting tomorrow's attire. | Michael torhan (X) | |
waiting to pair up | Good term selection The scene is a costume-party where cuckolding is running rampant (hence the person dressed up in -cuernos-). So -pegarles- here is "hooking up with someone" instead of "fighting/hitting". | Michael torhan (X) No agrees/disagrees | |
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e | Omission ...was | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
said | Grammar errors ...they were saying... maybe aloud to each other, because the narrator in the doc. is hearing them | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
it | Other Is it an ''it' or a person'? On the safe side:=> mysteriously, asked me. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
+2 1 I responded positive I wasn't lying | Punctuation "I responded, positive..." | Jenny Westwell | |
+1 Look at what an opportunity! | Other Literal translation, I don't think it works here. | Jenny Westwell | |
+2 1 he was saying to a very peculiar being who had dressed completely in an abundance of little horns, a black cloak arm in arm with its equal. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin | |
-1 1 she | Grammar errors ...than her. | axies | |
+1 Then take comfort in her virtue | Other —''Así descansas tú en su virtud'' Literally: this way you (can)rest in her virtue. Real meaning, judging from the text, beginning to the end of document: '' this way you don't have to be worried/ be concerned, about her virtuousness’’ =>Is this a sarcastic comment/remark to the husband out having f | axies | |
th | Punctuation comma | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
surge | Omission ... wave/ A wave? Lacks of clarity; chain/wave of words/thoughts... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
waiting to pair up | Mistranslations | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend didn’t find what he was looking for, and I assume he really wasn’t looking for anything, which is exactly what happens to a lot of people. True, there were some mothers looking for their daughters, and some husbands looking for their wives, but not a single daughter was looking for her mother, and not a single wife searched for her husband. “Maybe,” they said, “they fell asleep amongst all the confusion in one of the rooms...” “That’s possible”, I said to myself, “but not likely.” A mask headed in my direction. “Is that you?” a voice asked with an air of mystery. “It’s me.” I answered, certain I was not lying. “I recognised the domino; but tonight is impossible. Paquita is over there, but her husband was determined to come. We don’t know where on earth he found tickets. What a shame! Just look at this event! We saw you but, since she didn’t dare come and speak to you herself, she sent me to tell you that tomorrow without fail we’ll see you at Sartén... Red domino with white ribbons... “Great.” “Will you be there?” “I wouldn’t miss it.” “Where’s your wife, man?” asked an odd-looking creature dressed in little cornucopias, a black domino with another one on his arm. “Sleeping at this hour. No matter how hard I tried, I couldn’t get her to come. Nobody on earth hates parties more than she does.” “This way you can be assured of her virtue. Do you plan on staying all night?” “No, just until four o’clock.” “That’s good”. At this, the person with the cornucopias moved away, and I overheard these words: “He didn’t suspect a thing.” “How could he? If I left an hour after he...” “He said four o´clock?” “Yes.” “We have time. Are you sure about the maid?” “There’s nothing to worry about, because...” A wave interrupted the thread of my curiosity. The rest of the conversation was mixed with repeated voices of: “Do you know me?” “I know you”, etc. Wasn’t it just my luck that I was wearing that night a domino just like all of the lovers? Certainly happier than Quevedo who appeared at night for anyone waiting, to fight with them? —“Psst, psst! I finally found you,” said another slim mask, grabbing me by the arm, and with a voice tender and agitated with satisfied hope. “Were you looking for me a long time?” “Not at all, because I didn’t expect to find you.” | Entry #15664 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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| Good term selection Agreed. Larra is suggesting that tonight's party guests are anything but virtuous. But because the wife stays home she remains chaste. | Michael torhan (X) | |
Wasn’t it just my luck that I was wearing that night a domino just like all of the lovers? Certainly happier than Quevedo who appeared at night for anyone waiting, to fight with them? | Other Quevedo was known for getting into fights... One of the few who has understood this. | Karen Dinicola No agrees/disagrees | |
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said | Grammar errors ...they were saying... maybe aloud to each other, because the narrator in the doc. is hearing them | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
Just look at this event | Spelling ''What an opportunity''! What an opportunity lost! | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
+2 1 asked an odd-looking creature dressed in little cornucopias, a black domino with another one on his arm. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin | |
“He | Spelling nada ha sospechado. No one suspected/ this. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend didn’t find what he was looking for, and the reason for this, as I came to suppose, was that he wasn’t really looking for anything, which is exactly what happens to a lot of other people. Some mothers, it is true, were looking for their daughters, and some husbands were looking for their wives, but not one single daughter was looking for her mother, nor one single wife for her husband. Maybe, or so people were saying, they had fallen asleep in the confusion during one of the performances…“Well, I suppose it’s possible,” I said to myself, “possible, but not very probable.” A mask shot towards me. “Is it you?” it asked me mysteriously. “Yes, it’s me.” I answered, sure that I wasn’t lying. “I recognised your domino; but tonight’s impossible; Paquita's over there; but the old man insisted on coming; we don’t have a shimmer where the devil he got the tickets. It’s such a shame! What bad luck! We saw you, and not daring to come and talk to you herself, she sent me to tell you that you can meet tomorrow, without fail, at ‘La Sartén’…She’ll be wearing a red domino and white bows…” “Alright.” “Will you be there?” “Without fail.” “And what about your wife, old boy?” a black domino, who was arm in arm with another wearing an identical domino, said to a very queer creature all dressed up in little horns of plenty. “She’ll be sleeping by now. As much as I tried, I couldn’t get her to come; there is no woman more averse to having fun.” “Well, like that, you can rest in her virtue. Are you thinking of staying all night?” “No, until four.” “Yes, you’re very wise.” By this time, the man with the little horns had moved away, and I overheard the following words, “He didn’t suspect a thing.” “How is it possible? I came out an hour after he did…” “Did he say at four o’clock?” “Yes.” “We’ve got time. Can you trust the maid?” “Oh, there’s nothing to worry about on that score, because…” A surge of people severed the thread of my curiosity, and the remaining words of the dialogue became confused with voices constantly repeating, “Do you know who I am? I know who you are,” etc. Well, did it not appear that the stars were shining upon me that night, just by wearing a domino that was exactly the same as that of all the lovers; I was certainly more felicitous than Quevedo, who, masked in the cloak of night, appeared to whoever was waiting, in order to hit them? “Psst! Psst! Oh, I’ve found you at last,” another slender mask said to me, taking me by the arm, and in a voice tender and excited with expectation satisfied. “Have you been looking for me long?” “Well, no, actually, because I wasn’t really expecting to find you.” | Entry #18920 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Britishbritish
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appeared to whoever was waiting, in order to hit them? | Other Yes. Quevedo was known for getting into fights. | Karen Dinicola No agrees/disagrees | |
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or so | Mistranslations not in original doc. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 +2 1 during one of the performances… | Mistranslations the original makes no mention of a performance | Emma Martinez | |
ell, I suppose it’s possible,” I said to myself, “possible, but not very probabl | Other not sure we can't do with ''It's possible...but not likely''; I said to myself. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
it | Other Is it an ''it' or a person'? On the safe side:=> mysteriously, asked me. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 1 I answered, | Mistranslations not in original doc. | axies | |
virtue | Other ... her virtuousness; his trust in her. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
, | Punctuation No;... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend didn't find what he was looking for, which led me to assume that he wasn't really looking for anything, which is precisely what happens to a lot of other people. Some mothers, sure, look for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but there isn't a single daughter looking for her mother, nor a single wife for her husband. Maybe, they’ll say, they mistakenly fell asleep in some room... It’s possible, I thought to myself, but it’s not likely. A mask came shooting at me. “Is it you?” it asked me mysteriously. “Indeed it’s me,” I said, certain I wasn't lying. “I went to the domino games; but tonight it’s impossible; Paquita is there; but her husband is bent on coming; we don’t know where in the world he got the tickets. What a shame! What an opportunity! We saw you, and since she didn't dare speak to you herself, she sent me to tell you that tomorrow, no matter what, you will meet at La Sartén... Dominoes embodied and white lace... “All right.” “Will you be there?” “I won’t miss it.” “And your wife, man?” he was asking a strange creature dressed entirely of miniature cornucopias, a black domino arm in arm with a kindred one. “She must be sleeping; as much as I tried, I couldn't get her to come; there’s no worse enemy of fun than her.” “That way you can rest in her virtue. Do you plan on staying here all night?” “No, only until four.” “Good plan.” In the meantime, the one with the mini-horns had moved away, and I overheard these words: “He’s not suspecting anything.” “How could he? I left an hour after he...” “Did he say four?” “Yes.” “We've got time. Are you sure about the maid?” “There’s no worry at all, because...” A surge interrupted the thread of my curiosity; the remaining words of the dialogue got mixed up with the repeated voices: “do you know me?”, “I know you”, and so on and so on. Did it not seem fateful for me to have brought home that night a domino like the one all lovers have? A happier one, for sure, than Quevedo, who looked at night like all those waiting to strike? “Hush! Hush! Finally I've found you,” a different slender mask told me while tugging at my arm, its tender voice agitated with contented hope. “Have you been looking for me long?” “No, actually, because I wasn't really looking for you.” | Entry #20123 — Discuss 0 — Variant: USuseng
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How could he | Flows well In context, this makes more sense than the "how is that possible" or "how could that be" chosen by most | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
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look | Mistranslations progressive form:We say: ...were''looking for; searching for; trying to find, etc, etc,.’’ Also in English the verbs need to be repeated, otherwise doesn't make sense to the reader. i.e. ...some mothers were looking for... and some husbands were looking for/ searching... and so on | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
’ll say | Mistranslations ...they were saying... maybe aloud to each other | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
It’s possible, I thought | Spelling This paragraph lacks of style and does not show/appear to be a monologue. Maybe?: ''It's possible...but not likely''; I said to myself. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
shooting | Mistranslations sounds strange and incorrect. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
he was asking a strange creature dressed entirely of miniature cornucopias, a black domino arm in arm with a kindred one. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin No agrees/disagrees | |
to have brought home | Mistranslations | lugoben No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend did not find what he was looking for, and I went so far as to assume, that this meant that he was not looking for anything, which was precisely what happened to many others. Some mothers, indeed, were looking for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but not a single daughter sought her mother, nor a single wife her husband. Perhaps – they said – amid all the confusion, they had fallen asleep in a room somewhere… It is possible – I said to myself, - but not likely. A mask came shooting towards me. - Is that you? – it asked me mysteriously. - It is – I replied, convinced I was not lying. - I have met the domino; but it is impossible tonight; Paquita is over there; what is more, the husband insisted on coming too; we don’t know where the devil he found tickets. A great pity! What an occasion! We spotted you, and not daring to speak to you in person, she sent me to tell you that tomorrow, without fail, you will see each other at the “Sartén”… Domino incarnate with white ribbons … - All right. - Will you be there? - I’ll be there. - And your wife dude? - I said to an extremely strange oddball that had dressed up in little horns of plenty, a black domino with another, equally dressed, on his arm. - She will be asleep now; despite everything I have tried, I have been unable to persuade her to come; there is no greater enemy of amusement. - And so you rest at ease in her virtue; are you planning to stay here all night? - No, till four o’clock. - You do well. At this the horned one had moved away, and I half overheard these words: - He suspected nothing. - How was that possible? I left one hour after he did … - At four o’clock he said? - Yes. - We have time. Are you sure about the maid? - Nothing to worry about because … A surge cut through the thread of my curiosity; the rest of the words of the conversation were confused by repeated cries of: Do you know me? I know you, etc, etc… Well, did it not seem that my star would not bring me a domino tonight similar to all the other lovers, happier than Quevedo, certainly, who would appear at night to those waiting in order to beat them? - Chris! Chris! Finally I have found you – another graceful mask said to me seizing me by the arm and in a voice tender and stirred with satisfied hope. Have you been looking for me long? - Not really, because I did not expect to find you. | Entry #20918 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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A mask came shooting towards me. | Flows well | keelin feeney No agrees/disagrees | |
-2 2 incarnate | Good term selection Agreed. When reading beyond this excerpt, this article is all about the "black dominos". Red is not the translation because red is out of place for the story. Besides, Paquita's friend would not be suggesting tomorrow's attire. | Michael torhan (X) | |
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it | Mistranslations inappropriate use of "it" when referring to a person | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
dude | Other This is not the right register for a piece written in the 19th century. | Jenny Westwell No agrees/disagrees | |
happier than Quevedo, certainly, who would appear at night to those waiting in order to beat them | Spelling Larra's writing satirized Spanish society from 1831 to 1837; Quevedo was a satirist who fell from favour in 1620! "pegarles" could be "pegarles suerte" here. | Jenny Westwell No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend didn't find what he was looking for, and as I once eventually boasted, it was because he wasn't looking for anything, which is exactly what happens to so many other people. Some mothers, it's true, look for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but not a single daughter was looking for her mother, and not a single wife for her husband. Perhaps - they said - they have fallen asleep in the confusion in some room... It is possible - I would say to myself - but unlikely. A mask shot towards me. "Is it you?" it asked me mysteriously. "It is I", I replied, certain I wasn't lying. "I recognised the mask, but tonight it's impossible; Paquita is there; but her husband has insisted on coming; we don't know how on earth he found tickets. What a shame! Fancy the occasion! We saw you and not daring to speak to you herself, she has sent me to tell you that you will meet without fail tomorrow at the Sartén... Red cloak and white bows..." "Fine" "Are you?" "I'll be there" "Where's your wife, man?" a black mask with another similar one at his arm said to an extremely strange being that was dressed in abundant horns "She'll be sleeping now; no matter how hard I tried, I haven't been able to convince her to come; there is no greater enemy of enjoyment." "That way you can rest in her virtue; are you planning on being here all night?" "No, until four" "Good idea" Meanwhile the one with the horns had drifted away, and I overheard these words: "He suspected nothing" "How is it possible? I left an hour after he did..." "At four did he say?" "Yes" "We have time. Are you sure about the maid?" "That's no worry at all, because..." A wave broke the thread of my curiosity; the rest of the dialaogue became confused with the repeated voices of "do you recognise me?" "I know you", etcetera, etc. So didn't it seem, my star, that this night had brought a masquerade just like that of all lovers, happier, it's true, than Quevedo, which by night resembled all those waiting to hit them? "Hush, hush! I finally found you" another slim mask said to me, taking me by the arm with a tender voice agitated by satisfied expectation. Have you been looking for me for long? - No in fact, because I didn't expect to find you. | Entry #17171 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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look for their daughters, | Grammar errors progressive form; ...were looking for... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| Mistranslations inappropriate use of "it" when referring to a person | amanda moody | |
mask | Mistranslations The excerpt doesn't tell the whole story (available online). "Careta" is used for mask. Plus, in attendance are a Moor, an Oscar statue, an Edipus, a Vestal Virgen, a Roman, a New World Indian and 100 Black Dominós, so dominó is a costume. | Michael torhan (X) No agrees/disagrees | |
So didn't it seem, my star, that this night had brought a masquerade | Spelling | Candace Holt Ryan No agrees/disagrees | |
slim | Mistranslations slender mask | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
- No in fact, | Spelling ''No''; ''in fact...'' | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend did not find what he was looking for, and as I later assumed, he wasn’t looking for anything, which is precisely what happened with many of the others. Some mothers were looking for their daughters, yes; and some husbands were looking for their wives, but not one daughter was looking for her mother, nor one wife looking for her husband. Maybe, they said, they fell asleep in all the confusion, in one of the rooms…It’s possible, I said to myself, but not likely. A mask came quickly towards me. “Is it you?” it asked me mysteriously. “It is me,” I answered as not to lie. “I met the cloaked person; but tonight is impossible; Paquita is there, plus her husband insists on coming. We don’t know how the hell he found tickets. What a shame! What an opportunity! We saw you, and she didn’t dare talk to you herself. She sent me to tell you that tomorrow, without fail, you’ll meet at Sartén…Red cloak and white ribbons… “Good.” “You’ll be there?” “Without fail." “And your wife, man?”, he was saying to a strange being who was dressed entirely with horns of plenty, a black cloak carrying the same on his arm. “She must be sleeping now. I tried to no avail, I couldn’t convince her to come. There is no one more opposed to fun.” “So you can relax in her virtue. Will you be here all night?” “No, just until four.” “That’s good.” He was walking away from the one with the horns of plenty and I overheard these words: “He doesn’t suspect a thing.” "How was that possible? I left an hour after him..." "He said at four?" "Yes." "We have time. Are you sure about the maid?" "There is nothing to worry about because..." A wave interrupted my curiosity; the rest of the words of the conversation were lost in voices repeating: "do you know me?" "I know you," etc., etc. Didn't it seem then, star of mine, that this night brought a cloak just like all the other lovers', happier, for sure, than Quevados who seemed like the night to all who waited to be near him? "Psst! Psst! I've finally found you," said another, willowy mask taking my arm, and with her voice soft and excited out of fulfilled hope. "'Have you been looking for me for a while?" "Not at all, since I didn't expect to find you." | Entry #21200 — Discuss 0 — Variant: USuseng
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| My friend didn't find what he was looking for and, as I was later able to boast, that was because he wasn't looking for anything, which is exactly what happens to many others. It’s true that some mothers were looking for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but not a single daughter was looking for her mother, nor a single wife for her husband. “Perhaps”, they said, “they have fallen asleep somewhere amid the confusion …” “It's possible”, I said to myself, “but it's not likely”. A masked figure shot towards me. “Is that you?” the figure asked me, enigmatically. “It’s me”, I answered, certain that I wasn't lying. “I met the domino, but tonight is impossible; Paquita is there; what’s more, her husband has insisted on coming; we don’t know where the hell he’s found the cash. What a pity! Look at the opportunity! We saw you and, not daring to talk to you herself, she sent me to tell you that you will see each other tomorrow without fail in the Sartén ... A red domino mask and white ribbons ... “Good.” “Will you be there?” “I’ll be there.” “What about your wife, man?” the figure said to a strange being dressed all in little horns of plenty, a black domino walking arm-in-arm with another. “She’ll be sleeping now; as hard as I tried, I couldn't persuade her to come; there isn't a woman alive who is more of a killjoy.” “So you rest on her virtue. Are you going to be here all night?” “No, until four.” “Be good.” By this point, the horned one had moved away and I half-heard these words: “He doesn't suspect a thing.” “How could he? I left an hour after him ...” “At four, he said?” “Yes.” “We have time. Are you sure about the maid?” “There is no need to worry, because ...” A wave severed the thread of my curiosity; the rest of the words of the conversation became confused among the repeated calls of “Do you know me?”, “I know you” - and so on, and so on … Well, didn't it seem that my star had brought a domino to me tonight, as to all lovers? Happier, certainly, than Quevedo, who appeared at night to those who were waiting so that he could hit them! “Psst! Psst! I've found you at last”, another slender masked figure said to me, seizing me by the arm, her voice tender and excited by the hope fulfilled. “Have you been looking for me for long?” “No, of course not, because I wasn't expecting to find you.” | Entry #21661 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Britishbritish
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Happier, certainly, than Quevedo, who appeared at night to those who were waiting so that he could hit them | Other Yes! Quevedo was known for getting into fights | Karen Dinicola No agrees/disagrees | |
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was later able to boast, | Mistranslations ...presumed; estimated; thought; imagined. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
said | Spelling prog. form ...were saying... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
somewhere | Mistranslations ...in a room... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
cash | Mistranslations tickets | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
the figure said to a strange being dressed all in little horns of plenty, a black domino walking arm-in-arm with another. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin No agrees/disagrees | |
virtue | Mistranslations ''Así descansas tú en su virtud'' Literally: this way you (can)rest in her virtue. Real meaning, judging from the text, beginning to the end of document: '' this way you don't have to be worried/ be concerned, about her virtuousness’’ => Is this a sarcastic comment/remark to the husband out having f | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
, | Punctuation ''No''; ... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
“He | Mistranslations nada ha sospechado. No one suspect it/ this. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend did not find what he was looking for and, inasmuch as I had come to guess, the object was indeed for him to not find anything, which is precisely what was happening to many another. Yes, some mothers were looking for their daughters and some husbands for their wives, but not a single daughter looked for her mother, nor a single wife for her husband. The ladies could—said someone—have nodded off in some other room amidst the hubbub... It is possible—I said to myself—but not likely. A masked partygoer came shooting towards me. —Is that you?—she asked mysteriously. —It is—I responded, making sure not to lie. —I knew you from the black cassock; but tonight it is impossible to be certain; Paquita is just over there; but her husband has endeavored to come; where the devil he found tickets, we do not know. It puts a damper on things! But how fortuitous chancing upon you! We saw you, and not wanting to be so bold as to talk with you herself, she is sending me to tell you that tomorrow you two shall definitely rendezvous in "The Frying Pan"...Black Cassock in the flesh with a clerical collar accompaniment. —Good. —You will be there? —I shall not miss it. —And your wife, dear fellow?—a man's voice was questioning a strange being who had dressed in a profusion of suggestive little horns. The questioner was a Black Cassock who was leading another identical Black Cassock by the arm. —She must be sleeping at this hour; as much as I tried I could not convince her to come; among killjoys there is none better than she. —Then you can rest assured of her virtue; Do you plan to be here all night? —No, only until four. —You do well! With this, the one with the horns took his leave and then I half-heard these words: —He suspected nothing. —How was it possible? If I left an hour after he... —He said at four o'clock? —Yes. —We have time. Are you sure about the maid? —There is absolutely nothing to worry about, because... A wave of partygoers cut my curiosity short; the remaining words of the dialogue blended into the repeated banter: Do you know me? I know you. Etcetera, etc. Was it not my good fortune to have worn tonight a black cassock identical to those which all the paramours were wearing? Certainly luckier than Quevedo, who by night looked like the countless others who hoped to find with whom to tryst. —Psst! Psst! At last I found you—said the svelte masked guest grasping my arm, with her gentle voice excited at having found me. —Had you been looking for me long? —No, actually, because I was not expecting to find you. | Entry #15578 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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the object was indeed for him to not find anythin | Mistranslations totally irrelevant | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
to many another | Mistranslations | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 1 looked | Grammar errors progressive form; ...were looking for... | axies | |
—said someone— | Punctuation Direct speech, all the way though | Ana Maria Edlin No agrees/disagrees | |
partygoer came shooting | Spelling running...in haste... in a hurry = a correr; con prisa; | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend did not find what he was looking for, and so I came to presume it was because he was not looking for anything, which is precisely the same as what was happening to many others. Yes, some mothers were looking for their children, some husbands for their wives, but not one single child was looking for his mother, not one single wife for her husband. “Perhaps,” they said, “they ended up falling asleep in some room amidst all the comings and goings...” “It is possible,” I said to myself, “but not probable.” A masked person rushed up to me. “Is it you?” the masked one asked mysteriously. “I am,” I answered, certain of not lying. “I recognised the domino. Tonight is impossible. Paquita is here. What's more, her husband insisted on coming. We have no idea how in the devil he managed to get tickets. Such a pity! But look, what an occasion! We saw you, and not daring to speak to you herself, she sent me to tell you that tomorrow, without fail, you can meet in the Sartén... a red domino with white ties...” “Fine.” “You will be there?” “I will be there.” “And your wife, my friend?” the person said to a rather strange fellow who was dressed head to toe in horns of plenty, a black domino like he was wearing on his arm. “She will be sleeping now. Hard as I tried, I was unable to convince her to come. There is no greater enemy of amusement.” “And so, you rest in her virtue. Do you plan to be here all night?” “No, only until 4 o’clock.” “You do well.” With that, the man in the little horns moved away, and I half-heard these words: “He did not suspect a thing.” “How could that be? If I left an hour after him...” “At four o’clock, he said?” “Yes.” “We have time. Are you sure about the maid?” “No need to worry about a thing, because...” A great surge of people cut off the source of my curiosity. The rest of the words in the dialogue were lost in the repetition of voices saying: Did you recognise me? I know you, etcetera, etc. Was I not lucky to have worn that night a domino just like those of the lovers, happier, certainly, than Quevedo, who appeared at night to those waiting, only to beat them? “Psst! Psst! Finally, I found you,” another slender masked person, grabbing me by the arm, said to me in a tender voice, excited by satisfied hope. “Have you been looking for me for long?” “Certainly not, because I did not expect to find you." | Entry #21319 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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happier, certainly, than Quevedo, who appeared at night to those waiting, only to beat them? | Other Yes. Quevedo was known for getting into fights. | Karen Dinicola No agrees/disagrees | |
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it | Punctuation comma | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
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for | Other In English the verbs need to be repeated, otherwise doesn't make sense to the reader. i.e. ...some mothers were looking for... and some husbands were looking for/ searching... and so on | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
child | Mistranslations | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
, | Punctuation and... instead of comma; also: in English the verbs need to be repeated, otherwise doesn't make sense to the reader. i.e. ...some mothers were looking for... and some husbands were looking for/ searching... and so on | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
said | Grammar errors prog. form: they were saying... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
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Tonight is impossible | Omission ''pero...'' however; moreover; though; | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
+2 1 how in the devil | Other "How in the devil" would usually be either "how the devil", "how the hell" or "how in hell" | amanda moody | |
tickets | Mistranslations I understood "billete" to mean money. | Ira Saied No agrees/disagrees | |
+2 1 the person said to a rather strange fellow who was dressed head to toe in horns of plenty, a black domino like he was | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia | Ana Maria Edlin | |
No, | Punctuation No;... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
a | Punctuation stop (.) (;) | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend did not find what he was looking for, and that meant, as far as I presumed, he was not looking for something, which is precisely what happens to many others. Some mothers were looking for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but not one daughter looked for her mother, nor did any wife look for her husband. Maybe- they would say- they fell asleep amidst the confusion in one of the rooms...It is possible- I would say to myself- but it is not probable. A mask came rapidly at me. "Is it you?," he asked mysteriously. "It is I," I replied making sure I did not lie. "I recognized the domino, but tonight is impossible; Paquita is there, and her husband was determined to come, we don't know where the hell he has found money. It is too bad! What timing! We have seen you, and because she dares not talk to you, she has sent me to tell you that tomorrow you will see each other at la Sartén...A red domino and white ribbons..." "Fine." "Will you be there?" "I will not miss it." "And your wife, man?" he was saying to a very strange being that had worn horns head to toe, a black domino who was arm in arm with another dressed identically to him. "She must be sleeping, as much as I tried, I couldn't make her want to come; there is no bigger killjoy than she." "So you enjoy the rewards of her virtue. Will you be here all night?" "No, until four." "That's good." The horned man had stepped away, and I overheard these words: "He has suspected nothing." "How was that possible? I left an hour after he did." "At four he said?" "Yes." "We have time. Are you sure about the maid?" "Not to worry, because..." A wave cut short my curiosity, the rest of the words in the dialogue became confused with several voices: do you know me? I know you, etc. etc. Well, was it not my fate to be wearing a domino identical to the one worn by all the lovers, happier, as it were, than Quevedo, who appeared at night to the many who waited to hit them ? "Psst! Psst! I finally found you!," another more svelte mask said to me, taking my arm, its tender and agitated voice belying hope that had been fulfilled. "Had you been looking for me for a long time?" "Not really, because I did not think I'd find you." | Entry #17213 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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It is too bad! What timing! | Other You clearly distinguished the bad luck of Paquita's husband attending with the good luck of stumbling upon "Larra". | Michael torhan (X) No agrees/disagrees | |
"So you enjoy the rewards of her virtue | Flows well | Laurie Munslow No agrees/disagrees | |
was it not my fate to be wearing a domino identical to the one worn by all the lovers | Flows well | Laurie Munslow No agrees/disagrees | |
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something, | Mistranslations ...anything; a single thing... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
look | Grammar errors ...was looking... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
would say | Grammar errors ...were saying... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
would say | Spelling I repeated it to myself... said it aloud... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
at me | Mistranslations ...toward(s) me. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
It is I | Grammar errors It is me. | Ira Saied No agrees/disagrees | |
there | Mistranslations "here", surely? | Rachel Fell No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 1 money | Mistranslations tickets | axies | |
have seen you | Grammar errors past tense ...we saw you | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
he was saying to a very strange being that had worn horns head to toe, a black domino who was arm in arm with another dressed identically to him. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin No agrees/disagrees | |
g, | Punctuation new paragraph. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
make her want | Mistranslations ...convince her... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
, | Punctuation ''No; until four.'' | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
wave | Omission ... wave/chain of thoughts... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
several | Mistranslations ...several but: repeated voices/sounds | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
be wearing a | Omission (esta noche)...tonight... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
more svelte | Mistranslations why "more"? | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend didn't find what he was looking for because, as I suspected, he wasn't looking for anything, which is precisely what happens to many other people. Yes, some mothers were searching for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but not a single daughter was looking for her mother, and not a single wife, for her husband. Perhaps, they said, they fell asleep in the midst of the disorder of some room... “It's possible,” I said to myself, “but unlikely.” A masked woman rushed towards me and asked mysteriously, “Is it you?” “It's me,” I replied with the certainty that I wasn't lying. “I got to know the domino, but it's impossible tonight. Paquita is there, but her husband insisted on coming; we don't know where the hell he got tickets. Such a big shame! What an opportunity! We saw you and, since she doesn't dare talk to you herself, she sent me to tell you you will meet tomorrow, no excuses, in The Frying Pan... Red domino and white ribbons...” “All right.” “Do you agree?” “I won't miss it.” “And your wife, man?” I asked a very odd being who was all dressed up as little horns of plenty, a black domino carrying another just like him by the arm. “She's probably sleeping now; no matter how hard I tried, I couldn't convince her to come; there's no greater enemy of fun than her.” “Thus you rest in her virtue; do you plan to be here all night?” “No, only until four.” “Good for you.” Then the man with the little horns moved away, and I faintly heard some words. “He suspected nothing.” “How was that possible? I left an hour after he did...” “Did he say at four?” “Yes.” “We have time. Are you sure about the maid?” “There's nothing to worry about because...” A wave of people cut the thread of my curiosity; the rest of the words in the conversation were mixed with the repetitive voices that asked, “Do you know me? Do I know you?”, et cetera, etc. Didn't it seem be my destiny to have brought a domino tonight that was the same as that of all the lovers, happier, in fact, than Quevedo, that looked at night like those who waited to beat them? “Psst! Psst! I finally found you,” exclaimed another slender masked woman, taking me by the arm, her voice full of tenderness and excitement at hope fulfilled. “Have you been looking for me for long?” “No indeed, because I wasn't expecting to find you.” | Entry #21271 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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| Good term selection Agreed. By the process of deduction, Paquita's friend must be female. | Michael torhan (X) | |
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they said | Spelling progressive form; ...were saying... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
you you | Spelling repetition | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
The Frying Pan | Mistranslations ??? | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
+1 I asked a very odd being who was all dressed up as little horns of plenty, a black domino carrying another just like him by the arm. | Mistranslations | Ira Saied | |
a black domino carrying another just like him by the arm | Other How can he carry another domino by the arm? Carry suggests lifting off the ground in English. | Jenny Westwell No agrees/disagrees | |
happier, in fact, than Quevedo, that looked at night like those who waited to beat them | | Jenny Westwell No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend did not find what he was looking for, and as I suspected, he was not really looking for anything, and that is precisely the same thing that happened to many others. Some mothers were definitely looking for their daughters, and some husbands were searching for their wives, but not one daughter was looking for her mother, neither was any wife looking for her husband. Perhaps—they said—they had fallen asleep somewhere in the midst of the confusion... It’s possible—I said to myself—but not likely. A mask came rushing toward me. —Is that you?—it asked mysteriously. —It is I—I responded, making sure not to lie. —I met Domino; but this night is impossible; Paquita is here; plus her husband made every effort to be here; we don’t know where the hell he found tickets. That’s a real shame! Look at this event! We saw you and since she didn’t feel bold enough to talk to you, she sent me to tell you that tomorrow, without fail, you will see each other at la Sartén... Domino in the flesh and white ties... —Ok. —Are you coming? —I won’t miss it. —And your wife, man?—he said to a very strange being that was dressed in little horns of plenty, a black domino with a similar one on his arm. —She must be sleeping now; no matter how hard I tried, I could not convince her to come; there is no-one who hates festivities more. —So, you are resting; do you plan to stay here all night? —No, until four. —Good move. He had now moved away from the one with the little horns, and overheard these words: —Nothing was suspected. —How was this possible? If she left one hour after him... —Did he say at four? —Yes. —We have time. Are you sure about the maid? —There is no problem at all, because... A surge interrupted the train of my curiosity; the other words in the conversation became confused with the repeated voices of: do you know me? I know you, etc. etc. Well, didn’t my star bring me this night a domino just like the one that all lovers bring, happier, certainly than Quevedo, who appeared at night to those who waited for it, to hit them? —Tsk, tsk! I finally found you—said another slim mask, clutching my arm, with a soft and agitated voice, reflecting satisfied hope. Have you been looking for me for a long time? —Not really, because I did not expect to find you. | Entry #16024 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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-2 2 Domino in the flesh and white ties... | Flows well Agreed. When reading beyond this excerpt, this article is all about the "black dominos". Red is not the translation because red is out of place for the story. Besides, Paquita's friend would not be suggesting tomorrow's attire. | Michael torhan (X) | |
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-1 1 tickets | Mistranslations The source text is ambiguous. Billete is usually money in Latin America. In Spain they use it to mean ticket, but that is far from being universal. | Ira Saied | |
| My friend did not find what he was looking for, in my opinion he was not trying to find anything, which, is precisely what happens to many others. Several mothers looked for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but not even one single daughter looked for her mother and no woman sought for her husband. They said, - maybe, amid the confusion, they've fallen asleep in a room -... I thought - "possible - but no likely". A mask hastily came towards me. - Is that you? She asked in a mysterious tone. -It's me - I replied, knowing that I was not lying. - I've seen the domino, but tonight it will not be possible Paquita is there, though her husband has insisted to come, we don't know where on earth he has found some money. What a shame! It was a great opportunity! We saw you, and as she did not dare to talk to you, she has asked me to tell you that tomorrow, come what may, she will meet you at Sartén... incarnated domino and white bows... -Alright. - Will you be there? -I shall not fail. - And what about your wife? - asked a black domino, who took a similar one by the arm, to a strange oddfellow dressed up with small cornocupias. - By now, she might be asleep, even though I've tried, I could not convince her to come; there's no one that hates fun as she does. - And you rest within her virtue. Will you be here all night? - No, only until four. - You do well. Meanwhile, the cornocupias' fellow had walked away, and I overheard: - He has suspected nothing. - How could that be possible? I left one hour later than him. - Has he said until four? - Yes. -We still have time. Do you trust the maid? -There's nothing to worry, as... A flurry cut off my train of curiosity, the rest of the words were mixed up with repeated voices: do you know me? I know you, etc. Well my star, hasn´t the night brought a similar domino to that of every lover, indeed happier than Quevedo, who appeared at night expecting to beat how many? - Hush! Hush! I found you at last - said a different slender mask, and, taking me by the arm, added with her gentle voice, shaken by fulfilled hope. Has it been long since you started looking for me? - Certainly not, as I was not expecting to find you. | Entry #16336 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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Well my star, hasn´t the night brought a similar domino | Spelling | Candace Holt Ryan No agrees/disagrees | |
| Mi friend did not find what he was looking for, and according to what I came to presume, he was not looking for anything at all, which is exactly the same that happens to so many others. True, some mothers did look for their daughters, and some husbands did look for their wives, but neither did a single daughter look for her mother, nor did a single woman look for her husband. Perhaps -they said- they had fallen asleep in some bedroom in the midst of the turmoil. It is possible -I said to myself-, but not likely. A mask came straight to me. "Is it you?" They mysteriously asked. "It is me," I answered, certain that I was not lying. "I met the domino; but it is impossible tonight; Paquita is there; but her husband has insisted in coming; we don't know where on Earth he has found tickets. Such a pity! Would you believe it? We have seen you and, not daring to speak to you herself, she sends me to tell you that tomorrow without fail you two will meet in the Sartén... Red domino and white ribbons..." "Okay." "Will you?" "I will be there." "What about your wife, man?" they said to a most strange being that had dressed itself with an abundance of small horns, a black domino that had another similar one by the arm. "She's probably sleeping now. Try as I did, I could not convince her to come; she is the ultimate enemy of fun." "So you have fun on her behalf. Do you plan to stay here all night?" "No, just until four." "That is good." Meanwhile, the one with the small horns had gone away, and I half-heard these words: "He has suspected nothing." "How was it possible? I went out an hour after him..." "Did he say at four?" "Yes." "We have time. Are you certain about the maid?" "Don't worry about it, because..." A surge or people interrupted my curiosity; the other words of the dialogue were mixed up with the repeated do you know mes, i know yous, and so on. For did it not seem lucky for me to have brought tonight a domino that looked like the ones from all the lovers, happier, by the way, than Quevedo, who at night looked like any other person people intended to hit? "Hey! Hey! I finally found you," said to me another slim mask, with its soft voice excited with satisfied hope, grabbing my arm. "Have you been looking for me for long?" "Not really, because I did not expect to find you." | Entry #16873 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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they said | Grammar errors ...they were saying... maybe aloud to each other, because the narrator in the doc. is hearing them | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
They | Spelling incorrect capital "T" | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
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-1 1 tickets | Mistranslations The source text is ambiguous. Billete is usually money in Latin America. In Spain they use it to mean ticket, but that is far from being universal. To me this was a bad guess unless you know this is European Spanish. | Ira Saied | |
Would you believe it? | Mistranslations transcreation and not the same | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
+2 they said to a most strange being that had dressed itself with an abundance of small horns, a black domino that had another similar one by the arm. | Mistranslations | Ana Maria Edlin | |
+1 So you have fun on her behalf. | Other —''Así descansas tú en su virtud'' Literally: this way you (can)rest in her virtue. Real meaning, judging from the text, beginning to the end of document: '' this way you don't have to be worried/ be concerned, about her virtuousness’’ =>Is this a sarcastic comment/remark to the husband out having f | axies | |
ue | Punctuation comma | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
+1 do you know mes, i know yous, | Spelling | axies | |
For did it not seem | Mistranslations Omit | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
intended to hit | Mistranslations | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend was unable to find what he was looking for, and as far as I could see, it seemed that he was not looking for anything, which is exactly what happens with many other people. Some mothers, admittedly, were looking for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but not a single daughter was looking for her mother, nor a single wife for her husband. “Perhaps,” they said, “they have fallen asleep amid the confusion in some room…”. “It is possible,” I said to myself “but it is not likely.” A mask suddenly appeared before me. “Is that you?” it asked me mysteriously. “It’s me,” I answered, sure that I was telling the truth. “I saw the domino; but tonight it was impossible; Paquita is here; and her husband was determined to come; we do not know where on earth he found the tickets. What a shame! What an opportunity! We saw you, and not daring to speak to you herself, she sent me to tell you that tomorrow that we will definitely see you in la Sartén… Domino body with white ties… “Right.” “Will you be there?” “I’ll be there.” “And you, too?” he said to a most bizarre-looking character who was dressed all over in horns of plenty, a black domino who was carrying a similar being on his arm. “It’s time to sleep; but for all I could do, I couldn’t persuade her to come; it’s only a bit of fun.” “And so you relax in the light of her virtue; are you thinking of staying all night?” “No, until 4 o’ clock.” “That’s good.” At this point he had removed his horns and I overheard him say: “No-one suspected anything.” “How was that possible? If I left an hour later after him…” “At four o’clock, you said?” “Yes.” “We have time. Are you sure about the maid?” “There’s nothing to worry about, because…” A sudden surge cut short my curiosity: other words in the conversation were mixed up with other people saying over and again “Do you recognise me?” “I know you,” etc., etc. “But isn’t it brilliant that I brought a similar domino outfit like all the other lovers tonight, better than Quevedo, to be sure, who turned out tonight for anyone hanging around just to beat them up? “Shush, shush! I found you in the end,“ said another subtle mask, hanging on to my arm, and in a voice that was tender and excited by satisfied expectation. “Have you been looking for me for long?” “No, I certainly haven’t, because I wasn’t expecting to see you.” | Entry #19828 — Discuss 0 — Variant: UKukeng
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| Grammar errors ...they were saying... maybe aloud to each other, because the narrator in the doc. is hearing them | axies | |
it | Other Is it an ''it' or a person'? On the safe side:=> mysteriously, asked me. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
was | Grammar errors ...is impossible | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
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body | Mistranslations colour: ...red | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 +2 3 he said to a most bizarre-looking character who was dressed all over in horns of plenty, a black domino who was carrying a similar being on his arm. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin | |
-1 1 “It’s time to sleep; but for all I could do, I couldn’t persuade her to come; it’s only a bit of fun.” | Spelling Lost all meaning | axies | |
| Other ''Así descansas tú en su virtud'' Literally: this way you (can)rest in her virtue. Real meaning, judging from the text, beginning to the end of document: '' this way you don't have to be worried/ be concerned, about her virtuousness’’ =>Is this a sarcastic comment/remark to the husband out having fu | axies | |
had removed his horns | Spelling ''el de cornecillos'' moves away etc. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
surge | Omission Lacks of clarity; chain/wave/surge of words/thoughts, etc,. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
who turned out tonight | Mistranslations más feliz, por cierto, que Quevedo, que se parecía = Happier, no doubt, than ''Quevedo'' resembling... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
“Shush, shush! | Mistranslations "Psst! Psst! I finally found you!," | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend couldn't find what he was looking for, and according to my assumption, it was because he wasn't looking for a thing, which is precisely what happens to many others. Yes, some mothers were looking for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but not a single daughter was looking for her mother, not a single wife her husband. They said, perhaps they stayed sleeping in the midst of the turmoil, in some room... Possible--I said to myself--not probable though. A mask leaped straight on towards me. --Is that you?--it mysteriously inquired. --It's me--I replied confident I was not lying. -- I recognized the domino, but it's not possible tonight. Paquita is there, but her husband insisted on coming, we have no idea where the heck did he find tickets. What a shame! Perfect timing huh?! We saw you, and not having the courage to speak to you herself, she sent me to tell you that you will definitely meet tomorrow at the frying pan... flesh-colored domino, white laces... --Ok. --Are you in? --I will be there. --Man, where is your woman?-- she said to a very strange being completely dressed in croissants, a black domino that paced with and identical one. --She'll be sleeping by now, I couldn't get her to come no matter how hard I tried. There's no one more against fun than her. -- And so you don't have to worry about her. Do you plan on staying here all night? --I don't, I leave at four. --Good for you. The guy with the croissants left by then and I indistinctly heard these words: --He doesn't suspect a thing. --How could he? I left an hour after him... --At four he said? --Yes. --We've got time. Are you sure about the maid? --Not a thing to worry about, because... A crowd interrupted the flow of my curiosity, the rest of the words in that dialogue got mixed up in between the repeated calls of: Do you know me? Do I know you? and so on and so forth. Well hadn't my luck brought tonight the same domino as those of all the lovers, happier by the way, than that of Quevedo, that looked at night like all those waited upon to get beaten? --Hey! hey! I finally found you--said to me another slender mask while grabbing my arm, and with her tender yet excited by the fulfilled hope voice asked. Were you looking for me for long? --Not really, for I wasn't expecting to find you. | Entry #16133 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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A mask leaped straight on towards me. | Other Doesn't flow well. | keelin feeney No agrees/disagrees | |
| Mistranslations inappropriate when referring to a person | amanda moody | |
+1 she said to a very strange being completely dressed in croissants, a black domino that paced with and identical one. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin | |
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| My friend didn´t find what he was looking for and in my opinion I presumed he wasn´t looking for anything, which is exactly what happens to many people. A few mothers, yes, they were looking for their daughters, and husbands were looking for their wives, but not a single daughter searched for her mother, and not a single wife searched for her husband. Maybe--they would say-- they´ve fallen asleep in some foyer amongst the confusion...It´s possible --- I would tell myself --- but not probable. A mask rushed towards me. - Is that you? --- it asked mysteriously. -- It´s me.-- I answered, very sure of myself. -- I met the domino; but tonight it´s impossible; Paquita´s here; and the husband was determined to come; we don´t know how in hell he got tickets. What a shame! Can you believe it? We saw you and she didn´t have the nerve to come talk to you so she sends me to tell you that definitely tomorrow you´ll meet at the Sartén...The domino in person with white ribbons... - Good. -- Agreed? -- I won´t miss it. -- And your wife, man? -- he asked a strange being adorned with an abundance of horns, a black domino that was arm in arm with another one alike. -- Probably sleeping now; no matter how hard I tried, I couldn´t convince her to come, never known one so against having fun. -- Then you´ll be at ease in her absence; plan on being here all night? -- No, until four. -- Good idea. -- Then the horned being moved away from the crowd and I partly heard these words: -- He hasn´t suspected. -- How is that possible? If I left one hour after he did... -- Did he say at four? -- Yes. -- We have time. Are you sure about the maid? -- Not to worry, because... A wave hit my steady stream of curiosity; the remaining words of the dialogue were confused with the voices repeating: do you know me? I know you, ect. ect. Well, wasn´t it just my luck wearing a domino tonight that was just like the other lovers´dominos? Happier, incidentally, than Quevedo, who at night looked like the ones who were waiting to give them a a beating. -- Psst, psst, I finally found you -- another slender mask told me while taking me by the arm and speaking in a tender and eager voice full of hope. Have you been looking for me long? --No, in fact I didn´t think I would find you. | Entry #16333 — Discuss 0 — Variant: USuseng
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+1 1 would say | Grammar errors ...they were saying... maybe aloud to each other, because the narrator in the doc. is hearing them | axies | |
+1 --- I would tell myself --- but not probable. | Other ''It's possible...but not likely''; I said to myself. | axies | |
-1 +1 1 it | Mistranslations inappropriate use of "it" when referring to a person | amanda moody | |
| My friend did not found what he was looking for, and for what I presumed, it consisted in that he was not looking for anything, which is precisely what happens to many others. Some mothers were indeed looking for their daughters, and some husbands were looking for their women, but not one daughter was looking for her mother, not one woman was looking for her husband. They would perhaps say - that they had fallen asleep with the confusion in one of the bedrooms...it is possible - I would tell myself, - but not probable. A mask came rushing towards me. - Is it you? - It asked me mysteriously. - It is I - I answered certain of not lying. - I recognized the cloak; but this night is impossible; Paquita is there; however her husband was determined to come; we don't know where the hell he found tickets. What a pity! What an occasion! We have seen you and she did not dare speak to you herself, she sent me to tell you that tomorrow you will see each other for sure in the Sartén...flesh colored cloak with white bows... - Ok - Are you sure? - I will be there. - Are you a man or a woman? - I was saying this to a strange being that had dressed itself of tiny horns of abundance, a black cloak that led another arm in arm. - It must be sleeping now, no matter what I tried, I couldn't make her come; there is no greater enemy of fun. - That is how you rest in its virtue; do you plan on being here all night? - No, just until four. - You would do well. Meanwhile the one with the tiny horns had distanced itself, and I overheard these words: - He did not suspect anything. - How is this possible? I left an hour after him... - At four he said? - Yes. - We have time. Are you sure about the maid? - There is nothing to fear, why... A flood interrupted my curiosity; the other words in the dialogue were getting mixed with voices that would repeat themselves with: do you know me? I know you, etc, etc. It did not seem like my fate to have brought tonight a cloak identical to the one of all lovers, by the way, happier than Quevedo, who would look similar to those that were waiting to hit him. -Hey! Hey! I finally found you - another slimmer mask told me, grabbing me by the arm, with its tender voice agitated by satisfied hope. Where you looking for me for a long time? - Not really, because I did not expect to find you. | Entry #22006 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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+1 My friend did not found what he was looking for | Grammar errors Grammatically incorrect, and a mistranslation | Emma Martinez | |
It | Mistranslations inappropriate use of "it" when referring to a person | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
I was saying this to a strange being that had dressed itself of tiny horns of abundance, a black cloak that led another arm in arm. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin No agrees/disagrees | |
It must be sleeping now, no matter what I tried, I couldn't make her come; there is no greater enemy of fun. | Mistranslations | Emma Martinez No agrees/disagrees | |
rest in its virtue | Mistranslations | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
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| My friend did not find what he was looking for, and according to what I ended up believing, he wasn’t looking for anything, which is precisely the case with many others. Some mothers were indeed looking for their daughters, and some men their wives, but not a single daughter was looking for her mother, and not a single woman was looking for her husband. Perhaps, they said, they had fallen asleep, amid the confusion, in some room… It’s possible—I told myself—but not likely. A mask came hurtling towards me. --Is it you? –it asked me mysteriously. --It’s me—I answered, sure that I wasn’t lying. --I recognized the domino, but it’s impossible tonight. Paquita is there but the husband has promised he’d come. I don’t know where the hell he got the money. What a pity! What an opportunity ! We saw you, but she didn’t dare speak to you herself; so she sent me to tell you that you’ll see each other at the Sarten…Red domino and white ribbons. --Good. ---Will you come? --I’ll be there. --What about your wife, man? asked a strange fellow dressed in little horns of plenty, holding a similar black domino over one arm. ---She must be sleeping now; as hard as I tried I couldn’t persuade her to come. There’s no bigger party-pooper than her. So find repose in her virtue. Are you going to be here all night? --No, just till four. -Be good. --As the man with the horns of plenty moved away, I half-heard these words: --He didn’t suspect anything. --How was it possible? If I left an hour after he…. --You said four o’clock? --Yes. --We have time. Are you sure about the maid? --There’s nothing to worry about, because … A wave cut the string of my curiosity short. The words of the rest of the dialogue became jumbled amid the repititious voices saying: Do you know me? I know you, etc. etc. So, doesn’t it seem that, tonight, my star has brought me a domino just as good as those that lovers have ,happier, for sure, than Quevedo, who looked by night like those waiting to catch them. Chis!, chis! At last I found you, said another svelte mask to me, taking me by the arm, and with her voice, tender and excited by satisfied hope, added: Have you been looking for me a long time? ---Certainly not, since I didn’t expect to find you. | Entry #19300 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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thei | Spelling In English, verbs/actions need to be repeated, otherwise doesn't make sense to the reader. i.e. ...some mothers were looking for... and some husbands were looking for/ searching... and so on | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
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asked a strange fellow dressed in little horns of plenty, holding a similar black domino over one arm | Mistranslations | Laurie Munslow No agrees/disagrees | |
So find repose in her virtue. | Other —''Así descansas tú en su virtud'' Literally: this way you (can)rest in her virtue. Real meaning Judging from the text, beginning to the end of document: '' this way you don't have to be worried/ be concerned, about her virtuousness’’ =>Is this a sarcastic comment/remark to the husband out having fu | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
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cu | Omission ... wave/chain of thoughts... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
a domino just as good as those that lovers have | Mistranslations | Laurie Munslow No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend did not find what he was looking for, and as I presumed, it was because he wasn't looking for anything, which is precisely what happens to many others. Yes, some mothers looked for their daughters and some husbands looked for their wives, but not one daughter looked for her mother and not one wife looked for her husband. Maybe, they would say, they have fallen asleep among the confusion in some room. It is possible - I would say to myself, - but not probable. A mask came shooting towards me. - Is that you? - It mysteriously asked me. - It is me. - I said, sure I was not lying. - I met domino, but tonight it is impossible. Paquita is here, and her husband insisted on coming. We don't know where he found money. That's too bad! What an occasion! We have seen you, and since she doesn't dare speak to you herself, she sends me here to tell you that you will definitely meet tomorrow at the Sartén. Red domino and white laces... - Ok. - Will you come? - I will be there. - And your woman, man? - It said to a strange being that was completely dressed in abundance horns, a black domino holding the arm of another one just like it. - She must be sleeping. No matter how much I tried, I couldn't get her to come. There is no other so averse to fun. - That is how you rest in her virtue. Do you plan on staying here all night? - No. Until four. - That is good. In the meantime, the one with the horns had walked away and I heard these words: - He did not suspect. - How is that possible? I left an hour later than he did... - Did he say until four? - Yes. - We have time. Are you sure about the maid? - There is no danger because... A crowd cut the thread of my curiosity. The rest of the dialogue was mixed with the repeated voices of: Do you know me? I know you, and so on. Wasn't it just my luck to have brought a domino tonight just like the one all the lovers had, happier, by the way, than Quevedo, who at night looked like everyone who was waiting to hit them? - Psst. Psst. I finally found you. - Said another slender mask, grabbing me by the arm. And then with her tender voice, agitated by satisfied hope: Have you been looking for me for long? - Not at all because I did not plan to find you. | Entry #15899 — Discuss 0 — Variant: USuseng
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Yes, some mothers looked for their daughters and some husbands looked for their wives, but not one daughter looked for her mother and not one wife looked for her husband. | Grammar errors The "ing" verb form is needed here. | Ira Saied No agrees/disagrees | |
It | Mistranslations inappropriate when referring to a person | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
It said to a strange being that was completely dressed in abundance horns, a black domino holding the arm of another one just like it. | Mistranslations | Ira Saied No agrees/disagrees | |
+1 t said to a strange being that was completely dressed in abundance horns, | Mistranslations | Ana Maria Edlin | |
| My friend didn’t find what he was looking for, and from what I gather, he wasn’t looking for anything in particular, which is precisely what happens to others. Well yes, some mothers do seek their daughters and some husbands their wives, but there wasn’t any daughter looking for her mother, nor any woman looking for her husband. Perhaps- they’d say – they might have overslept in any other room, considering the confusion reigning in the place. …. That’s possible, I said to myself, - but it is not likely. A masked person came rushing towards me. –Is that you? -He mysteriously asked me. –I am – I answered making sure I was telling the truth. –I recognized that domino costume you are wearing, but tonight it is impossible for me. Paquita is here, what is more, her husband is determined on coming and we don’t know, how on earth, he got the entrance tickets! It is a great shame! –Look, what a coincidence! We had seen you and as Paquita did ot speak to you then, she asked me to tell you that tomorrow, without fail, you will meet in La Sartén, she will be dressed in Domino red and white laces….….…. -Great -Are you going? -I’ll be there. –And where is your wife, man? He asked some weird Being, who had dressed in a disguise covered with little horns, accompanied by a person attired in a domino costume, with somebody else dressed in the same domino disguise holding from his arm. - She will be sleeping now, I suppose, but as much as I tried, I could not persuade her to come. I haven’t met anybody who would be more against any amusement than she does. -In this way, you’ll have a peaceful mind. Are you going to stay all night? -Not later than four. -Good for you. Then, the man dressed in little horns walked away and I overheard the following chat: -Did he suspect anything? -Was it possible? Look, I left home an hour after he did. -Did he say at four? -Yes. -Then, we have time in our favor. Have you taken care of the maid? -There is nothing to fear, because…. A surged of people talking came forward and interrupted my nosing around. I lost track of the rest of the conversation when it got mixed with repeated questions of Do you know me?, Do I know you? etcetera, etc. Now, although it wasn’t my luck to come to this party dressed in the same domino costume that all her lovers wore tonight, I am happier than Quevedo, as it turned out, who at night is sensitive to all those who are waiting to get clobbered. —Hey!, psst! I finally found you —said another masked slim person while taking hold of my arm, in a tender voice and excited that her wish came true. Have you been looking for me for long? —Not really, for I didn’t expect to find you here. | Entry #18133 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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A masked person came rushing towards me. | Flows well | keelin feeney No agrees/disagrees | |
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do seek | Grammar errors ...were seeking | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
any | Other ...a/one single... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
they’d say | Spelling ...they're saying... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
considering the confusion reigning in the place. …. | Mistranslations Acaso—decían,—se habrán quedado dormidas(,) entre la confusión(,) en alguna pieza... This how it should be interpreted and translated into English | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
He | Spelling incorrect capital "H" | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
+2 1 domino costume, with somebody else dressed in the same domino disguise holding from his arm. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin | |
| My friend didn't find what he was looking for and, as I happened to presume, he wasn't actually looking for anything, which is exactly the same what happen with a lot of other people. Some mothers were indeed looking for her daughters, and some husbands were looking for their wives, but not even one single daughter was looking for her mother, nor a wife for her husband. Perhaps - they were saying, - they had fallen asleep among the confusion in some part... It's possible - I told myself -, but it's not likely. A mask came direct to me. — Is that you? — asked me, mysterious. — It's me — I answered him, sure of not lying. — I met the domino, but tonight it's impossible. Paquita is there, but her husband is determined to come. We don't know where the hell he found tickets. It's a pity! Look what a situation! We have seen you, and don't daring speaking herself, she sends me to tell you that tomorrow with no doubt she will see you in the Sartén... Red domino and white ribbons... — OK. — Will you come? — I won't miss it. — And your wife, man? — said a very weird entity all dressed up with little horns of plenty, a black domino arms seized with another alike one. — She is sleeping now; even though I had tried, I couldn't tell her why she should come. There is no one more enemy of enjoyments. — Then you can rest in your virtue. Are you thinking of being here all night long? — No, until four. — You do well. In this the person with the little horns had gone away and I could heard these words: — He hasn't suspected. — How is it possible? If I went out one hour after him... — At four, have he said, haven't him? — Yes. — We have time. Are you sure about the servant? — She doesn't have any care, because... A wave cut the thread of my curiosity; the other words of the dialogue was mixed with the repeated voices of "Do you know me? I know you", etc. Didn't it looks like my star had brought to me that night a domino equal to all of the lovers, happier, of course, than Quevedo, which at night looked like the many who were expecting to beat them? —Psst! Psst! Finally I found you — told me another beautiful mask, seizing me by the arm, and with her voice warmed and excited by the hope satisfied. Are you looking for me for a long time? — No, of course, because I didn't expect meeting you. | Entry #15616 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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exactly the same what happen with | Grammar errors | Jenny Westwell No agrees/disagrees | |
asked me | Omission missing subject of "asked" | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
said a very weird entity all dressed up with little horns of plenty, a black domino arms seized with another alike one. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin No agrees/disagrees | |
At four, have he said, haven't him? | Grammar errors | Jenny Westwell No agrees/disagrees | |
didn't expect meeting you | Grammar errors | Jenny Westwell No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend did not find what he wanted, and as I came to suppose, consisted in not wanting anything, which is precisely the same thing that happens to many others. Yes, some mothers, sought their daughters, and some husbands their wives, but not a single daughter sought her mother, nor a single woman her husband. Perhaps, they were saying,-they have fallen asleep among the confusion in any room... It is possible - I said to myself,- but it is not likely. A mask came straight at me. -Is that you?-asked me mysteriously. -I am - I replied making sure of not lying. -I recognized the domino; but tonight is impossible; Paquita is there; but the husband has insisted in coming ; we do not know how the hell he found money. What a pity! look what an occasion! We have seen you, and not daring to tell you herself, sent me to tell you that tomorrow without fail you will see each other in the Sarten... Red domino and white ribbons ... -Well. -Are you in? -I will not miss it. - And your wife, man?-said to an extremely rare entity that had dressed entirely with cornucopias, a black domino that had another equally by the arm. -She should be sleeping now; regardless of what I have done, I could not convince her to come; there is no bigger party pooper. -So you rest you in her virtue; do you plan on being here all night? -No, until four. -You do well. By now the one with te cornucopias had moved away, and I overheard these words: -Nothing is suspected. -How is that possible? If I left an hour after he ... -At four he said? -Yes. -We have time. Are you sure about the maid? -There is no problem, because... A wave cut the thread of my curiosity; the other words of the dialogue were confused with the repeated voices of: do you know me? I know you, etc., etc.. Did it did not seem my lucky my star tonight to have brought a domino similar to all of the lovers', happier, of course, than Quevedo, who resembled at night those who expected to be hit? - Silencio! silencio! I finally found you, said another slender mask, seizing me by the arm, and his voice tender and stirred by the fulfilled expectation. Have you been looking for me long? —Not certainly, because I did not expect to find you. | Entry #17198 — Discuss 0 — Variant: USuseng
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wanted | Mistranslations ...was searching; looking for; | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
came to suppose | Mistranslations ...presumed; estimated; thought; imagined. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
wanting | Mistranslations wrong verb usage:> wasn't looking for; wasn't searching. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
sought their daughters, and some husbands their wives, but not a single daughter sought her mother, nor a single woman her husband. | Mistranslations Sought is incorrect. We say: ''looking for; searching for; trying to find, etc, etc,.’’ Also in English the verbs need to be repeated, otherwise doesn't make sense to the reader. i.e. ...some mothers were looking for... and some husbands were looking for/ searching... and so on | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
asked me mysteriously | Syntax mysteriously, asked me. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
I am | Syntax ...yes; it is I; yes; it is me. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
making sure | Mistranslations ...sure; certain; assured; without a doubt, etc. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
money | Mistranslations ...tickets | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
look what an occasion! | Mistranslations ...what an opportunity! | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
have seen | Grammar errors ...saw you | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
Silencio! silencio! | Mistranslations Psst! Psst! | Laurie Munslow No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend didn't find what he was looking for, and as I came to learn, that was because he wasn't looking for anything, which is precisely the same thing that has befallen many others. Some mothers, yes, looking for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but not a single daughter looking for her mother, not a single woman for her husband. Perhaps- they said,-they had fallen asleep in all the confusion on their part... It's possible- I said to myself,-but it's not likely. A mask came hurtling toward me. -Is it you?-he asked mysteriously. -It's me-I replied certain not to lie. -I met the domino; but tonight it isn't possible; Paquita is there; and her husband has committed to come; we don't know where in the hell she found tickets. Big shame! look what an occasion! We've seen you, and not daring to talk to you herself, she sends me to tell you that tomorrow she will see you at the Sartén without a doubt... The domino incarnate and white ribbons... -Fine. -Are you? -No I won't. -And your wife, sir?-I told her about a very rare being all dressed in horns of plenty, a black domino carrying another by the arm. -That way you can rest in his virtue; are you thinking of staying here all night? -No, until four. -You're right. This is how he got away from the orchids, and overheard these words: -He suspected nothing. -How was that possible? If I went out an hour after he... -At four you said? -Yes. -We have time. Are you sure about the maid? -There is nothing to worry about, because... A wave cut the thread of my curiosity; the other words of the dialogue were mixed up with repeated sounds of: do you know me? I know you, et cetera, etc. Well didn't it seem to be my star that a domino brought this evening just like all the other lovers, happier, for certain, than Quevedo, who thought at night about how many wanted to beat them? -Chis! chis! I finally found you-another slender mask told me, holding me by the arm, with his kind voice stirred by satisfied hope. Have you been looking for me long? -Certainly not, because I wasn't expecting to find you. | Entry #19936 — Discuss 0 — Variant: USuseng
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-3 2 incarnate | Good term selection Agreed. When reading beyond this excerpt, this article is all about the "black dominos". Red is not the translation because red is out of place for the story. Besides, Paquita's friend would not be suggesting tomorrow's attire. | Michael torhan (X) | |
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, looking for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but not a single daughter looking | Grammar errors verb is missing | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
they said, | Mistranslations ...they were saying... maybe aloud to each other, because the narrator in the doc. is hearing them | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
he | Other Is it an ''it' or a person'? On the safe side:=> mysteriously, asked me. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
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| My friend did not find what he was looking for, and as I came to find out, it was because he was not looking for anything, which is precisely what I told others. Some mothers, yes, they looked for their daughters, and some husbands and wives, but not one daughter looked for her mother, nor any wife her husband. Maybe - they would say, - they had fallen asleep in between the confusion in some piece... It's possible - I would say to myself, - but not probable. A mask shot toward me. -Is it you? - she asked me mysteriously. - It is me - I answered, certain that I was not lying. - I got to discover masquerades; but this night is impossible; Paquita is there; plus her husband was determined to come; we don't know where the hell he got money from. What a pity! Just look at this event! We saw you, and not having the courage to speak to you herself, she sends me to tell you that tomorrow without fail both of you will meet in the Sartén... skin colored mask and white laces... -Okay. -You're coming? -I won't miss it. -And your woman, man? - I was telling her even while she dressed in horns of abundance, a black costume that walked with a person with the same one on their arm. -She should be sleeping right now; for all I've tried, I haven't been able to make her decide on whether she's coming or not; there is no bigger enemy to fun. -That's how you rest in her virtue; are you thinking of staying here all night? -No, until 4 o'clock. -That's good. And this is how he escaped the horns and heard these words: -He has not suspected -How is that possible? If I left an hour after him... -At 4 o'clock he said? -Yes. -We have time. Do you trust the maid? -There is nothing to worry about, because... A wave cut the thread of my curiosity short; the rest of the words of the dialogue mixed with the repeating voices; do you know me? I know you, etc, etc. It didn't seem to be in my destiny to bring the same costume as the other lovers, more happy, certainly, than Quevedo, who looked at night like the many who expected to hit him? -Psst! Psst! I finally found you - another slender mask told me, taking me by the arm, and with her voice tender and agitated with unsatisfied hope. Have you been looking for me for long? -Not really, because I wasn't expecting to find you. | Entry #19645 — Discuss 0 — Variant: USuseng
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-1 1 she | Good term selection Agreed. By the process of deduction, Paquita's friend must be female. | Michael torhan (X) | |
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as I came to find out | Mistranslations I love the way the phrase works here, but the problem is that the Spanish text does not support it. | Ira Saied No agrees/disagrees | |
+1 which is precisely what I told others. | Mistranslations ...what happen(s) to other people | axies | |
+1 they looked for their daughters, and some husbands and wives, but not one daughter looked for her mother, nor any wife her husband. | Grammar errors should be in the ''ing'' progressive form; entire paragraph not specific and lacks of clarity | axies | |
+1 1 in between the confusion in some piece... | Mistranslations ibid as above | axies | |
- | Punctuation Entiendo que en inglés se utilizan comillas dobles si es US. | Wilsonn Perez Reyes No agrees/disagrees | |
-1 1 we don't know where the hell he got money from. | Spelling ibid; mistranslated | axies | |
+1 1 I was telling her even while she dressed in horns of abundance, a black costume that walked with a person with the same one on their arm. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin | |
+1 1 for all I've tried, I haven't been able to make her decide on whether she's coming or not | Mistranslations | Laurie Munslow | |
this is how he escaped the horns | Mistranslations | Laurie Munslow No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend didn`t find what he sought, and as I came to assume, it was that he sought for nothing, which is precisely the same that happens to many others. Some mothers, yes, looked for their daughters, and some husbands their wives, but not one daughter sought her mother, and not one wife her husband. Perhaps -they said- they have fallen asleep in the confusion in some room... It is possible -I said to myself- but not likely. A mask came fired towards me. - Is it you? -she asked me mysteriously. - I am - I answered her, making sure not to lie. - I knew the dominoes ; but tonight it is impossible ; Paquita is here ; and her husband is determined to come ; we have no idea where the hell he found tickets. Great shame! Look what a chance! We have seen you , and not dearing to speak to you herself , she sends me to tell yu that tomorrow without fail you will meet at the Sarten...red Dominoes and white ribbons... - Ok - - You will be there? - - I shalln`t let her down - - And you, man, woman? - she said to a very strange entity that had dressed himself all of little horns of plenty, a black dominoe that carried another one the same on his arm. _She will be sleeping now; try as i might , I could not persuade her to come ; there is noone more enemy of amusement. - Like this you rest in her merit ; are you thinking to be here all night? - No, until four. - You do well. With this the one with the horns had moved awaysome, and I overheard these words: - He did not suspect a thing. - How is it possible? I came out an hour after him... - At four did you say? - Yes. - We have time. Are you sure about the maid? - there is no worry, because... A wave cut the thread of my curiosity; the remaining words of the conversation were confused with the repeated voices of: do you know me? do i know you?, etcetera, etc. Why, did it not seem this night that my star had brought a domino equal to all those of lovers, happier, of course, that Quevedo, who looked at night like those waiting to hit them? - Chis! Chis! Finally I found you - another svelte mask said to me, grabbing me by the arm, and with her tender voice and agitated by satisfied hope. Have you been looking for me long? - Certainly not, for I didn`t expect to find you | Entry #18007 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Britishbritish
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she | Good term selection Agreed. By the process of deduction, Paquita's friend must be female. | Michael torhan (X) No agrees/disagrees | |
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sought for nothing | Mistranslations looking for; searching for; trying to find, etc, etc | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
looked for their | Mistranslations Re previous: Sought is incorrect. We say: ''looking for; searching for; trying to find, etc, etc,.’’ Also in English the verbs need to be repeated, otherwise doesn't make sense to the reader. i.e. ...some mothers were looking for... and some husbands were looking for/ searching... and so on | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
said | Grammar errors ...were saying... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
making | Mistranslations Sure of not lying | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
is | Grammar errors was... past tense | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
found tickets. | Grammar errors ...the tickets. (the tickets for this particular event) | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
have seen | Grammar errors ...saw | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
yu | Spelling | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
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+1 Why, did it not seem this night that my star had brought a domino equal to all those of lovers, happier, of course, that Quevedo, who looked at night like those waiting to hit them? | Grammar errors that = than. This doesn't appear to make sense. | Jenny Westwell | |
Chis! Chis! | Spelling Not used in English, which uses "Psst!" | Jenny Westwell No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend did not find what he was looking for, and by what I could presume, it consisted on looking for nothing at all, something that happens to many people. Yes, some mothers were looking for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but not even one daughter looked for her mother, nor woman for her husband. They said- perhaps it is that they had fallen asleep in between confusions in any piece ... It is possible but not probably, I said to myself. A mask came right at me. -Is it you?- It asked me mysteriously. -It is me.- I responded confident that I wasn’t lying. -I got to know the domino, but tonight it is impossible; Paquita is here: but her husband is determined to come... we don’t know where the hell he got the cash from. What a shame! How appropriate of him! We have seen you, and not daring to talk to you, she sends me to tell you that definitely tomorrow, you will both meet in the Sarten.... incarnated domino and white ribbons... -All right. -Are you with me? -I will be there. -And what about you, woman- man?- he told a rare being that had dressed all up of little horns of abundance, a black domino that held by the arm another one exactly like him. -She should be sleeping by now; because as much as I have done, I have not been able to convince her to come, there is no other enemy than herself with having fun. -This is how you deal with her virtue; Are you planning on staying all night long? - No, just until four. -You do well. The man of small horns had left by now and I half heard these words: -Nothing has been suspected. -How could it be possible? I only left an hour after him... -Did you say at four? -Yes. -We have time. Are you certain about the maid? -There is no reason not to, because... A wave interrupted the flow of my curiosity. The rest of the words in the dialogue were mixed up with repeated voices of: do you know me? I know you, etcetera, etc. Did it seem, star of mine, as if a domino (by the way, happier than Quevedo) was brought tonight just as the other lovers, who at night looked just like every other one who waited to beat him up? -Hush! hush!I have at last found you- another svelte mask said to me while grabbing my arm, with tender and shaky voice because of the hope that was satisfied. -Have you been looking for me for a long time? -Not at all, but only because I didn’t expect to find you. | Entry #18025 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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It | Mistranslations inappropriate use of "it" when referring to a person | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
he told a rare being that had dressed all up of little horns of abundance, a black domino that held by the arm another one exactly like him. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend hadn't found what he was looking for, and as I had come to assume, it was because in truth he wasn't looking for anything, which is precisely what happens to many people. Yes, some mothers were looking for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but not one single daughter searched for her mother, not a single wife for her spouse. A mask came suddenly toward me: "Is it you?" it asked, with an air of mystery. "I am," I responded, certain that I wasn't lying. "I recognized the cloak; but tonight it's impossible; Paquita is there; even her husband has taken the trouble to come; we don't know where in the world he's found tickets. What a shame! What an occasion! We saw you, and since she doesn't dare speak to you herself, she sent me to tell you that tomorrow, without fail, you will meet in the Sartén... Reddish cloak and white bows..." "Alright." "So, yes?" "I won't miss it." "And your wife, man?" he said to a very odd being who had dressed top to bottom in cornucopias, a black cloak and another that he carried in his arm. "She should be sleeping at the moment; as much as I've tried, I haven't been able to convince her to come; there is no one more adverse to diversions than she." "And so you rest in her virtue; do you plan to stay here all evening?" "No, until four." "You're doing the right thing." Meantime the strange man with the cornucopias had distanced himself, and I made out these words: "He hasn't suspected a thing." "How is that possible? I left an hour after him." "Four o'clock, he said?" "Yes." "We have time. Are you sure about the maid?" "They're not in the least bit cautious, since..." A sudden wave broke the thread of my curiosity; the remaining words of their conversation were confused with voices incessantly repeating: do you recognize me? I recognize you, et cetera, etc. | Entry #18059 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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in truth | Mistranslations extra to original/source | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
it | Mistranslations Is it an ''it' or a person'? On the safe side:=> mysteriously, asked me. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
I am | Mistranslations "It is" or "It is I". | Jenny Westwell No agrees/disagrees | |
he's | Grammar errors he has... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
+1 he said to a very odd being who had dressed top to bottom in cornucopias, a black cloak and another that he carried in his arm. | Mistranslations | Ana Maria Edlin | |
she | Omission ...she is | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
virtue | Other ''Así descansas tú en su virtud'' Literally: this way you (can)rest in her virtue. Real meaning, judging from the text, beginning to the end of document: '' this way you don't have to be worried/ be concerned, about her virtuousness’’ =>Is this a sarcastic comment/remark to the husband out having fu | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
How is that possible? | Mistranslations Not "How is that possible?" but "How could he possibly?" | Jenny Westwell No agrees/disagrees | |
I left an hour after him | Mistranslations ...una hora después que él... que él se habia... que él tomó su café. Oración indeterminada | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
wave | Omission ... wave/ A wave? Lacks of clarity; chain/wave of words/thoughts... | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend couldn’t find what he was looking for, and of what I boasted of, it consisted that I seeks for anything, which happens to a lot of people. Some mothers, in fact, look for their daughters, and some husbands look for their women, but any daughter look for her mother, and any woman look for their husband. Maybe—they say,—they have fallen asleep between the confusion of music… It’s possible— said to myself, —but not probable. A mask dashed to me. —Is that you?—asked me mysteriously. —I am—I responded sure not to lie. —I recognize the Domino; but tonight is impossible; Paquita is here; but her husband decided to come; we don’t know where the hell he get the ticket. What a shame! And the occasion too! We've seen you, and not been able to talk you by herself, she send me to tell you that tomorrow she will meet you in the Sartén… Embodied domino and white ribbons… —Good. —Agree? —I’ll be there. —And your wife? — said to a weird body dressed with tinny horns of plenty, a black domino hanging a horn in his arm. —Asleep at this moment; for hardest I tried, I couldn’t convince her to come; there’s no worst enemy of fun that her. —In that way you rest in her virtue; You plan to stay all night long? —No, just till fourth. —You’re doing well. In that moment the guy with the tinny horns walked away and I overheard these words: —He didn’t suspect anything. But how is it possible? I left one hour after him… — At four he said? —Yes. —We have plenty of time. Are you sure of the woman servant? —You don’t have to worry about, because… Waves of sounds make me lose the thread of my curiosity; the words confused with the repetitive voices of: Do you know me? Yes I know you, etcetera, etc. It doesn’t looks like you bring a domino same as the other lovers my star, in fact, more happy than Quevedo, appeared at night to those who has been waiting to be paid? —Hey! hey! At least I found you—told me another slender mask, grabbing me from the arm, and with her agitated and tender voice for the satisfied expectation. Has it been long you’ve been looking for me? Not really, because I didn’t expect to see you. | Entry #15737 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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asked | Omission missing subject of "asked" | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
said to a weird body dressed with tinny horns of plenty, a black domino hanging a horn in his arm. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin No agrees/disagrees | |
It doesn’t looks like you bring a domino same as the other lovers my star | Mistranslations | Laurie Munslow No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend did not find what he was looking for, and as I went so far as to presume, it consisted of the fact that he was not looking for nothing, which is precisely the same thing that happens to many others. Some mothers, yes, would look for their daughters, and some spouses their women, but a sole daughter neither searches for her mother nor a single mother her husband. Perhaps – they said – they have fallen asleep amid the confusion in any part…It is possible – I say so myself, – but it is not probable. A pretext arrived suddenly to me. "Are you He asked me mysteriously. – I am – I answered sure without lying. – I knew domino; but this night is impossible; Paquita is there; more so the husband has insisted to come; we don’t know where the hell he has found airplane tickets. What a pity! You look at what occasion! We have seen you, and not daring to talk to you herself, she sent me to tell you that tomorrow without fail you will see in the frying pan…Red domino and white laces… – Good. – Are you? – I will not miss. – And your wife, man? – He told me a most rare entity dressed with abundant little horns, a black domino which was carrying the other equal arm. – She is sleeping by now; even though I did, I could not decide to come; there is no other enemy of fun. – Thus you rest on her own virtue; do you plan on being here all night? – Not until four o’clock. – You are doing good. In this they moved on one from the little horns and I half-heard these words: – Nothing has been suspected. – How was that possible? If I left an hour after he… – Four o’clock she said? – Yes. – We have time. Are you sure of the servant? – There is nothing to care about, because… A wave cut the thread of my curiosity; the rest of the words of the dialogue were confounded with repeated voices of: do you know me, I know you, and other things, etc. Why I did not seem to have brought my star tonight a domino equal to all lovers, happier, of course, than Quevedo, who looked for a few hours waiting to beat them? – Shh! Shh! Finally I found – other slender pretext I said, seizing me by the arm, and with his tender voice and stirred by satisfying hope. How long were you looking for me? – Certainly not, because I was not expecting to find you. | Entry #21842 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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as | Mistranslations extra; sounds foreigner | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
of the fact | Mistranslations extra; | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
would look | Mistranslations We say: ''looking for; searching for; trying to find, etc, etc,.’’ Also in English the verbs need to be repeated, otherwise doesn't make sense to the reader. i.e. ...some mothers were looking for... and some husbands were looking for/ searching... and so on | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
spouses their women, but a sole daughter neither searches for her mother nor a single mother h | Mistranslations ibid and as per previous paragraph | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
said | Grammar errors verb in the progressive form: ...they were saying... maybe aloud to each other. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
He | Spelling incorrect capital "H" | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
even though I did, I could not decide to come | Mistranslations | Laurie Munslow No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend didn’t find what he was looking for, and as much as I could understand, it consisted that he wasn’t looking for anything at all, that is to say precisely the same that happens to many others. Yes, some mothers do look for their daughters, and some husbands for their wives, but not even one daughter was looking for her mother, not even one woman was looking for her husband. Maybe – they were saying- they have fallen asleep between the confussion in some room … It is posible – I said to myself- but it is not probable. A masquerade came directly to me. --Are you?— misteriously, he inquired --I am—I answered sure of not lying. --I met the domino; but tonight it’s impossible; Paquita is there; but her husband has insisted in coming; we don’t know where on earth he has found money. It’s a real pity! Look at you what an ocassion! We have seen you, and not daring to speak she herself to you, she sends me to tell you that definitely tomorrow you’ll meet at the (Frying) Pan… Red domino and white laces… -- It’s ok. --Do you understand? --How could I forget. --And your wife, my man? – he was talking to a strange being dressed all covered with abundance of little cornaments, a black domino that was carrying another one on his arm, it was similar to the first one. --She must be sleeping by now; I insisted a lot, but I couldn’t make her decide to come; she is a great enemy of amusements. --So that is the way you approve her attitude, are you thinking to stay here all night long? In that very moment the one with the little cornaments was going away, and I half heard these words: --She hasn’t suspected at all. -- How could this be possibe? Sure I went out an hour after him. --Yes. --We do have enough time. Are you sure about the maid? --Never mind at all, because … Oh my star, didn’t it seem that this night I had brought the same domino as those of the whole lovers?, happiest than Quevedo, of course, who at night was alike those who were expecting to hit them? Something like a big wave, broke off the thread of my curiosity; the other words of the dialogue mixed up with the repeated voices of: do you know me? I know you, and so on… --Sh! Sh! I found you, at last – told me another slim masquerade, holding my arm, and with her tender and excited voice because of the satisfied hope. --Have you been waiting long? --Of course not, because I wasn’t expecting to find you. | Entry #21611 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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(Frying) Pan | Mistranslations Names should not be translated, this is referring to a place known as the Sartén. | Emma Martinez No agrees/disagrees | |
he was talking to a strange being dressed all covered with abundance of little cornaments, a black domino that was carrying another one on his arm, it was similar to the first one. | Mistranslations This word order makes it clear: un dominó negro, que llevaba otro igual del brazo, le decía a un ente rarísimo que se había vestido todo de cuernecitos de abundancia. | Ana Maria Edlin No agrees/disagrees | |
-- | Punctuation Use quotes, not dashes | Karen Dinicola No agrees/disagrees | |
told me another slim masquerade, holding my arm, and with her tender and excited voice because of the satisfied hope. | Syntax | Laurie Munslow No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend never found what he was searching for, and secondly I have arrived at the presumption that his search didn't really consist of searching for anything, which is exactly the same fate that many others fall into. Some women who want to be mothers search for daughters, husband like gentlemen for wives, but never is a single daughter looking for their mother, nor a single minded woman looking for a husband. It is said, perhaps, they have fallen asleep during the confusion of all this... It's possible---I said to myself,---but not likely. A masked figure came quickly towards me. ---Is that you?---I asked cryptically. ---It is I---She responded sure of no lies. ---I knew the dress, but tonight that is impossible; Francisca is here; but her husband insisted on coming; we don't know where in the hell he found tickets. What a pity! What an occasion look at you! Having seen you, and not being sure to talk to you, he sent me to tell you that we will see you in the morning without fail calling the shots. Trying to control blushing red then pale white. ---Ok. ---Are you? ---I'll be there. ---What about your wife, guy?---she said like a little devil wearing a black dress short in length, ---Sleeping at the moment, even though I came, it wasn't my decision to come, it was only because I had nothing better to do. ---So you rest in your virtue; Think you will be here all night? ---No, only until 4. ---That's good. With that, she dropped her thorny exterior, and began again: ---Nothing has been suspected. ---How is that possible? If I left an hour after him. ---At 4 you said? ---Yes ---We have time. Are you sure of the maid? ---There is no being careful, because... A surge of thoughts crossed my mind, the rest of the dialogue became jostled up with the repeating voices of: "do I know you?" "I know you," etcetera, etc. Why didn't it seem to be a smash hit wearing this dress I brought tonight, the dress equal to all of his loves, I was happier, for certain, than all of Quevedo, but how many others were spending the night waiting to be hit on? ---Hey! Psst! I finally found you, said another slender masked person, grabbing me by my arm, with a tender and agitated voice, finally satisfied after waiting so long. Have you been looking for me long? I'm not certain, because I wasn't expecting to find you. | Entry #16466 — Discuss 0 — Variant: USuseng
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Some women who want to be mothers search for daughters, husband like gentlemen for wives, but never is a single daughter looking for their mother, nor a single minded woman looking for a husband. | Mistranslations | Laurie Munslow No agrees/disagrees | |
She | Mistranslations le respondí - I replied | Laurie Munslow No agrees/disagrees | |
calling the shots | Mistranslations | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
even though I came, it wasn't my decision to come, it was only because I had nothing better to do. | Mistranslations | Laurie Munslow No agrees/disagrees | |
dropped her thorny exterior | Mistranslations | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
the dress equal to all of his loves | Mistranslations | Laurie Munslow No agrees/disagrees | |
waiting to be hit on | Mistranslations | amanda moody No agrees/disagrees | |
| My friend did not find what he wanted, and as I got to brag, was that not looking for anything, which is precisely what happens to them many others. Some mothers, yes, looking for their daughters, their husbands and some women, but not a single mother looking for her daughter, not a single woman to her husband. Perhaps, they said,-they have fallen asleep amid the confusion out parts ... It's possible I was saying to me-but it's not likely. A mask shot came towards me. - Are you mysteriously asked me?. -I am-I answered sure not lie. Domino-met; but tonight is impossible; Paquita is there; but the husband is determined to come; do not know where the hell banknotes found. What a pity!You look at what occasion! We have seen, and not daring to talk to herself, sent me to tell you that morning without fail I see in the pan ... I incarnate Domino and white ribbons ... -All right. - Are you? -I miss you. - What about your wife, man said to a rare entity that was dressed all in little horns of plenty, wearing a black domino just another arm-le?. -Sleeping is now; even though I've done, I could not be decided to come; there is no other enemy amusement. -So you you rest in virtue; Are you going to be here all night? -No, until four. -You are right. In this he was out of the horned and entreoí these words: 'Nothing has been suspected. - How was it possible? If I left an hour after he ... - At four you say? -Yup. -We have time. Are you sure the maid? -There is no care, because ... A wave cut the thread of my curiosity; other words mixed up dialogue repeated voices: do you know me? I know, etc., etc.. Why, did not seem to have brought my star tonight a domino equal to all lovers, happier, of course, that Quevedo, who looked for a few hours waiting to hit them? - Chis!Chis! I finally found you, I said another slender mask, seizing me by the arm, and his voice tender and stirred hope satisfied. How long have you wanted me? -Not at all, because they expect to find. | Entry #17479 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specifiednone
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-1 +2 1 My friend did not find what he wanted, and as I got to brag, was that not looking for anything, which is precisely what happens to them many others. | Grammar errors This simply doesn't make sense | Emma Martinez | |
es, looking for their daughters, their husbands and some women, but not a single mother looking for her daughter, not a single woman to her husband. Perhaps, they said, | Mistranslations complete paragraph has been mistranslated. | axies No agrees/disagrees | |
| Mistranslations Out parts does not exist in English | Emma Martinez | |
shot came t | Grammar errors Awful - tThis doesn't seem to have been written by someone who speaks English properly, so why on earth bother? | Rachel Fell No agrees/disagrees | |
that morning without fail I see in the pan | Mistranslations | Laurie Munslow No agrees/disagrees | |
man said to a rare entity that was dressed all in little horns of plenty, wearing a black domino just another arm-le? | Mistranslations | Laurie Munslow No agrees/disagrees | |
Sleeping is now; even though I've done, I could not be decided to come; there is no other enemy amusement. | Mistranslations | Laurie Munslow No agrees/disagrees | |
because they expect to find | Mistranslations | Laurie Munslow No agrees/disagrees | |
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