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Sunday Mornin' Comin' Down

Well, I woke up Sunday morning
With no way to hold my head that didn't hurt.
And the beer I had for breakfast wasn't bad,
So I had one more for dessert.
Then I fumbled in my closet through my clothes
And found my cleanest dirty shirt.
Then I washed my face and combed my hair
And stumbled down the stairs to meet the day.

I'd smoked my mind the night before
With cigarettes and songs I'd been picking.
But I lit my first and watched a small kid
Playing with a can that he was kicking.
Then I walked across the street
And caught the Sunday smell of someone's frying chicken.
And Lord, it took me back to something that I'd lost
Somewhere, somehow along the way.

On a Sunday morning sidewalk,
I'm wishing, Lord, that I was stoned.
'Cause there's something in a Sunday
That makes a body feel alone.
And there's nothing short a' dying
That's half as lonesome as the sound
Of the sleeping city sidewalk
And Sunday morning coming down.

In the park I saw a daddy
With a laughing little girl that he was swinging.
And I stopped beside a Sunday school
And listened to the songs they were singing.
Then I headed down the street,
And somewhere far away a lonely bell was ringing,
And it echoed through the canyon
Like the disappearing dreams of yesterday.

On a Sunday morning sidewalk,
I'm wishing, Lord, that I was stoned.
'Cause there's something in a Sunday
That makes a body feel alone.
And there's nothing short a' dying
That's half as lonesome as the sound
Of the sleeping city sidewalk
And Sunday morning coming down.

The winning entry has been announced in this pair.

There were 10 entries submitted in this pair during the submission phase, 3 of which were selected by peers to advance to the finals round. The winning entry was determined based on finals round voting by peers.

Competition in this pair is now closed.


Entries (10 total; 3 finalists) Expand all entries

Entry #14830 — Discuss 4
Winner
Voting points1st2nd3rd
379 x401 x1
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Segments3.503.53 (52 ratings)3.47 (57 ratings)
Entry4.004.00 (2 ratings)4.00 (2 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • 2 users entered 5 "like" tags
  • 2 users agreed with "likes" (2 total agrees)
  • 1 user disagreed with "likes" (1 total disagree)
رفعتُ
Good term selection
Tayma Nassour
راقت
Good term selection
Tayma Nassour
استنزفتُ
Good term selection
Tayma Nassour
-1
+2
1
التي يبثُّها صوت رصيف المدينة الغافية
Flows well
MohamedAhmed
أحلام الأمس المتلاشية
Flows well
MohamedAhmed
Entry #14750 — Discuss 0
Finalist
Voting points1st2nd3rd
245 x41 x22 x1
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Segments2.912.80 (58 ratings)3.03 (60 ratings)
Entry3.173.00 (3 ratings)3.33 (3 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • 1 user entered 1 "like" tag
  • 3 users disagreed with "likes" (3 total disagrees)
-3
2
كان ذهني قد تبخر من أثر التدخين في الليلة السابقة
Flows well
Meriem Bouda
Entry #14467 — Discuss 0
Finalist
Voting points1st2nd3rd
142 x43 x20
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Segments2.882.74 (59 ratings)3.02 (62 ratings)
Entry3.003.00 (1 rating)3.00 (1 rating)
Entry tagging:
  • 2 users entered 3 "like" tags
  • 4 users agreed with "likes" (6 total agrees)
+2
1
أرفع
Good term selection
Tayma Nassour
+1
رحلة الحياة
Good term selection
Tayma Nassour
+3
مثل أحلام الأمس المتلاشية
Flows well
Noura Tawil


Non-finalist entries

The following entries were not selected by peers to advance to finals-round voting.

Entry #14645 — Discuss 0
jehd mahdi
jehd mahdi
Ireland
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Segments2.842.69 (50 ratings)2.99 (55 ratings)
Entry2.342.00 (3 ratings)2.67 (3 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • No "like" tags
Entry #14674 — Discuss 0
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Segments2.832.85 (61 ratings)2.81 (65 ratings)
Entry2.502.00 (2 ratings)3.00 (2 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • 1 user entered 1 "like" tag
  • 1 user agreed with "likes" (1 total agree)
+1
وفي مكان ما بعيد، يرن جرس وحيد
Flows well
Noura Tawil
Entry #14435 — Discuss 0
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Segments2.722.70 (58 ratings)2.75 (61 ratings)
Entry2.502.00 (2 ratings)3.00 (2 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • 2 users entered 2 "like" tags
وبربي، لقد ذكرتني بشيء قد فقدته
Flows well
Meriem Bouda
كأحلام الأمس المتلاشيات
Flows well
Noura Tawil
Entry #14714 — Discuss 0
MohamedAhmed
MohamedAhmed
United States
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Segments2.692.68 (60 ratings)2.70 (65 ratings)
Entry2.001.00 (1 rating)3.00 (1 rating)
Entry tagging:
  • 1 user entered 3 "like" tags
  • 1 user agreed with "likes" (2 total agrees)
+1
من متسخ قمصاني
Flows well
Noura Tawil
على دربي
Good term selection
Noura Tawil
+1
معه صبية ضحوك يوءرجحها لعبا
Flows well
Noura Tawil
Entry #14704 — Discuss 0
MayDS
MayDS
United States
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Segments2.592.63 (57 ratings)2.54 (56 ratings)
Entry1.501.00 (1 rating)2.00 (1 rating)
Entry tagging:
  • No "like" tags
Entry #14552 — Discuss 0
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Segments2.562.50 (56 ratings)2.62 (59 ratings)
Entry2.252.00 (2 ratings)2.50 (2 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • 1 user entered 1 "like" tag
كأحلام الأمس المتلاشية
Flows well
Noura Tawil
Entry #14410 — Discuss 0
Rating typeOverallQualityAccuracy
Segments2.552.55 (57 ratings)2.55 (59 ratings)
Entry2.502.00 (2 ratings)3.00 (2 ratings)
Entry tagging:
  • 1 user entered 1 "like" tag
يستشعر
Good term selection
Noura Tawil